My BF's Work Bully (Chapter 6)
Added 2025-02-09 23:14:20 +0000 UTCVina is confident, loyal, and ready to stand up for Tommy. But when Jovan steps into their lives, her strength will be pushed to its limits. A dangerous game of manipulation and temptation begins.
Chapter 1: https://imgchest.com/p/9249vzbqm7n
Chapter 2: https://imgchest.com/p/n87wlvgxxyx
Chapter 3: https://imgchest.com/p/o24a3gv8dyl
Chapter 4: https://imgchest.com/p/ej7m9nk894d
Chapter 5: https://imgchest.com/p/dl7pvqw887o
Chapter 6: https://imgchest.com/p/ne7b5xgjk75
Comments
WOW, thatโs amazing to hear. Thank you so much!๐
HBO AMC
2025-02-10 22:23:53 +0000 UTCI really appreciate your feedback. I totally understand your point about the length. I'd love to add more extra dialogue and make the story more immersive, and the issue isn't about the time. Each chapter has an underlying theme tha drives the story and develops the characters. My concern is that adding extra dialogue could reduce the impact and intensity of the core scenes. This is my first story, and balancing tension with immersion is really challenging. I hope to improve over time๐
HBO AMC
2025-02-10 22:22:32 +0000 UTCTruly diligent in your updates and not keeping us waiting for the next part. Very realistic writing style. Hope you are able to sustain your writing style in future stories.
Clayton
2025-02-10 19:34:48 +0000 UTCYou might be my new favorite creator this story is great
Tx4life
2025-02-10 17:49:58 +0000 UTCHonestly some of the most realistic dialogue Iโve seen in a while. Great job. Only critique/ suggestion I have is if possible to make the chapters a little longer. Even if it take an extra day or something to get new stories I think adding a little length would be great
Omega6464
2025-02-10 15:32:13 +0000 UTCThanks so much! Comments like yours keep me motivated!๐
HBO AMC
2025-02-10 13:51:58 +0000 UTCHello, thank you for the chapter. Really love the pace and the writting. Keep up the good work ๐
Shinsuke
2025-02-10 06:12:05 +0000 UTC
