Mini Poll #2
Added 2023-02-15 18:43:14 +0000 UTCI hope everyone is enjoying MG so far. I'm always looking to improve my writing, so criticism is welcome! Here's a quick question regarding our main character, and lovely giantess, Jeannine.
Is there anything specific you'd like to see her do in the story? Perhaps you have an idea for a future scene or chapter? (You may want to read Chapter 29 before answering)
Comments
You’ll see some more of that in the coming chapters. It won’t be as ‘direct’ as in 29 but it’s there. I may be able to do another ‘test’ chapter down the line. It depends on how relevant it’ll be to the plot. If you want to give me more details for that, please DM me. Chapter 29 was treading the line for what I consider acceptable in my story. There will be at most one more scene like that, but not soon. Considering Jeannine sees Nick as a friend, I don’t think it makes sense for her to want to expose herself to him. The same goes for Nick, he isn’t interested in his best friend’s body. But I agree, the scenes where they tease each other are very cute :)
Jake Barry
2023-02-17 17:28:05 +0000 UTCTo be honest, I honestly just want more size comparison/difference scenarios! Chap. 29 was great with the 1-on-1 scale descriptions, but I also loved the past chapter with Icarus and his dad testing Jeannine's capabilities with not only expanding the town, but pushing their inventions to their absolute limits! I would love to see a chapter of absolute absurdity where Icarus and his dad try to quantify Jeannine's strength with a whole mess of instruments and inventions only for her to absolutely destroy everything that they prepare for her. Maybe even have a contest between MG and Jeannine to see if anyone can "match" her strength or speed (if you watch anime, something not too dissimilar to One Punch Man where Saitama crushes every physical test they give him). Other than that, while I know this story is not for any smut or hard core scenes, just more unintentionally lewd stuff or a bit more risqué stuff like in Chapter 29 when Jeannine was a bit more comfortable showing off a bit more of her body to Nick. Just short little cute scenes like that also make my heart FLUTTER
Morgan Freeman
2023-02-17 07:14:48 +0000 UTCYou will see something like that in an upcoming chapter. I believe it’s 35.
Jake Barry
2023-02-17 03:54:01 +0000 UTCI've just finish to read your last chapter. Jeannine want to know more about Lillis and convince her friend to respect MG. And that gave me an idea! They can use VR to know and see the world of Lillis and see how big they are. It would be a great experience for them.
tshufengvaj
2023-02-16 19:47:24 +0000 UTC
