Suggestions 11/17/22
Added 2022-11-17 17:36:57 +0000 UTCSame as always. Leave your thoughts and suggestions for me. I’m always looking to improve.
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Very dark indeed… But interesting! I’ll put it in my notes.
Jake Barry
2022-11-19 02:02:52 +0000 UTCSo I wonder if it would be interesting to have a short story that centers on a Lilli who perhaps has a form of Stockholm syndrome. Basically, despite being owned by a Gulli or Brob who is not kind like Jeannine, he strangely grows attached and it could be an interesting psychological take rather than one that focuses on how he might be sexually attracted to her. More like he embraces this life willingly and his sense of freedom is broken. Would be a good bit more tragic, but it could be quite a deep short story.
Acrophite
2022-11-19 00:26:50 +0000 UTCAll of these could easily be full length novels. Again, I’m only interested in short story ideas. That said, the concept for #3 is very interesting. I will be saving that one for later. Also, G, if you want to leave me messages this long, an email might be better haha
Jake Barry
2022-11-18 07:01:53 +0000 UTCquick question when it comes to short or long spin-off stories do you want them based only on The MG universe or do you want them to be based on different but similar worlds right? Because I got some offer some ideas that might pique your interest. You don’t have to use this idea if you don't want to but I thought I at least offer them to give you a head start for spin-off story ideas. Hope you like one or more of them anyway can’t wait for next week's chapter of MG. also sorry for it being so long again. 1 - In The lands of lilliput the former king and ruler died of a sudden illness leaving his only son to rule the land and his people at a young age (17) with barely any experience in knowing how to be a leader. In his journey to becoming a true leader, he learns the burdens and hardships of being a king and the difficulties of protecting his people from threats bigger than anything he has ever seen or read about while also mourning the death of his father. With his loyal adviser to help guide him while also forging his own path to be the great leader that his people need him to be. Also, meet new friends and allies both big and small to not only make his lands a better place but also the world itself. 2 - A pair of Brobdingnagians adopt a lilliputian boy and a Gulliverian girl with their firstborn child who never hated or saw the problem despite their size differences and becoming the first mix-size family. They learn to love and trust one another to find out what it means to be family. Just a simple slice of life and a gentle tone about loving your family even when you are different and not related by blood kind of story. (“We are” from ice age 4 playing while reading this) 3 - A Lilliputian becomes the first ever Lilliputian cop in the joint races forces with only Gullivernians and Brobdingnagians. With a strong sense of truth, justice, and equality for all he set out on some cases to prove himself to the others that doubt him and tell him to quit including the chief of the department who is a brob. He then partners up with a (either Gullivernian or Brobdingnagian your choice) that also think he is crazy for joining the force but like everyone else in the department are surprised by his commitment and willingness to risk his safety to proctor those who can’t protect themselves. With this, he begins to change the minds of others in the department and earn their respect. 4 - A Lilliputian father is left to care for his two children his oldest son (12) and youngest daughter (8) after losing his wife 4 years ago to (cancer or some disease your choice). His Son dealing with the hardest causing a shaky relationship with his father. He later finds that it's time to get out and find love again he goes to an online matchmaker and finally finds a match. Taking it slow and just texting each other to better know each other her finding out he is a single father and him finding out she can’t be pregnant and always wanted to be a mother. They go on their first date face to face but find a shocking truth that she is a (Gullivernian or Brobdingnagian). They find out if they can still find love evening when they are so different. (MKTO - classic playing) 5 - A Single Father Lilliputian taking care of his only daughter (15) finds himself separated from her after a Brobdingnagian attack and taken away. Wanting to keep his promise to his late wife to proctor and take care of their daughter he goes on a journey to find and rescue her facing all kinds of obstacles but refusing to give up or die until she is safe. ( One Call Away - Charlie Puth playing) 6 - A Lilliputian boy (16) gets into a chemical accident that gives him superpowers like flite, super strength, and super durability with more power that has yet to be unlocked. He uses this power to become a superhero to protect Lilliputian cities and people from Gullivernians and Brobdingnagians that would use their size to harm others. Keeping his hero's life secret from his parents and friends to keep them safe in his path to becoming the world's greatest hero. (Holding out for a hero - shark 2 playing
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2022-11-17 23:56:59 +0000 UTC
