Suggestions 11/09/22
Added 2022-11-09 19:25:30 +0000 UTCI’ve decided to make this a regular thing. Like before, feel free to share any feedback and story suggestions here. I’m also taking questions (within reason). I will do my best to respond.
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Rats!!! Well it was worth a shot
G
2022-11-11 18:14:49 +0000 UTCProbably not, sorry. Better to tell you straight than get your hopes up for nothing.
Jake Barry
2022-11-11 18:13:34 +0000 UTCOkay I got one more idea and just hear me out on this. Later in the story we find out an ancient but advanced city a lilies that found a way to remain in hidden from the outside world for hundreds of years being far more advanced in technology, medically, and knowledge than all brobs and live by one rule never interfere with the outside world and never be discovered and are found by Nick who tells them that people like them need their help and can’t just do nothing kinda like a Atlantis or wakanda like place. So any chance 😃.
G
2022-11-10 02:56:29 +0000 UTCHappy to have you!
Jake Barry
2022-11-09 23:20:13 +0000 UTCWill check that out for sure. This type of setting is just full of potential stories. Glad to be along for the ride!
Acrophite
2022-11-09 23:18:44 +0000 UTCI totally didn’t think of that nice one 👍 almost forgot how powerful ant man is when you think about. Especially how easily he could have killed thanos 😂 LOL I know that joke and but still funny no less
G
2022-11-09 23:15:09 +0000 UTCMaybe? I don’t have one planned right now.
Jake Barry
2022-11-09 23:08:16 +0000 UTCHmm… It’s cliche, but an ant-man style character would be fun. Size changing would allow them to live life among any of the three races. Plus they’d have some sort of strength or durability at any size.
Jake Barry
2022-11-09 23:02:52 +0000 UTCI currently have chapter outlines up to chapter 38. I expect to end it at around 40, but that could change. I don’t want it to drag. As for the spinoffs, they would be mostly unrelated, happening in a different but similar world (besides the Jeannine one). You can check out my story “The Right Choice” to get an idea of what I mean.
Jake Barry
2022-11-09 23:00:36 +0000 UTCAlso one question that doesn’t really relate to the story that much but just a cool idea in a way. If you were to add a lilie character as a superhero in MG (not say to add to the actual story by any means) which kind a hero would you like him or her to be a Batman, spider man or a Superman. Just a fun question I like to ask
G
2022-11-09 22:38:02 +0000 UTCHow long do you imagine Magna Gratia will go for? I noticed in the poll you have spinoffs planned, so it seems like this is a story you've had brewing for a while
Acrophite
2022-11-09 22:36:21 +0000 UTCOkay good enough for me even if it’s just one idea as long it help with the story that’s good enough for me. One question or more so a few will there be some kind of holiday special chapter? like for thanksgiving or Christmas or even Valentine’s Day which I don’t think it a holiday but my friends keep saying it is
G
2022-11-09 22:29:17 +0000 UTCReplying to 3 messages with this. I like the second idea, I might do something similar. The first and third are less likely, especially after what J explained in ch16. I also don’t want to shift too far from the city and her room in general, most of the time.
Jake Barry
2022-11-09 22:23:56 +0000 UTCAnd just one more idea I think that could be added in the story is seeing more of the government coming with ideas and plans to help lilies in need or better the relationship between brobs and lilies like combined police forces/military to find black market or find lilies settlement outside safe zones like the embassy and try to move or protect them from harm to show the governments for all three are trying to help at least and maybe they bust that black market place the Jeannine was buying from and that cabin restaurant that Sara and her where eating at as well
G
2022-11-09 21:10:10 +0000 UTCWe could also see the police in action stoping operations of mistreatment or killing lilies and also see which officers actually care or don’t for the safety of lilies and getting a sense of how the government handles these kinds of situations and how they really feel about equal rights for all including lilies
G
2022-11-09 21:03:02 +0000 UTCI think maybe we should visit the city or cities of lilliput and see the difference in life for them and the the lilies that live outside of I will say safe zones
G
2022-11-09 20:59:13 +0000 UTC
