Intruder
Added 2023-10-11 07:08:18 +0000 UTCSeptember's story is finally finally ready to publish. I believe it's my longest single part story I've ever written, and it comes with an equally unprecedented (I assume) 14 unique illustrations. I put a lot into this story, and I got a lot of help as well. Special thanks to Essex Eye for incredible editing and revision, and shout outs to Sora, Vocat, and Lyrissa as well for their constructive feedback. Not every suggestion you made was compatible with a story this complex, but I tried to incorporate what I could where I could.
I mentioned an additional comic to go along with this story, but I may not get to it with everything else I have going on this month as I'll get to next.
Between this story taking longer and the ongoing Suitober, the story I have planned for early November will have to be scaled back and may just be a prologue. However, I am working on an additional comic this month that I've projected from my plans to be at least 15-20 pages, so you can look forward to that before halloween.
Anyway without further ado:
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ThereAreSuitsAmongSuS
Comments
Thanks! It's been a treat to hear readers discovering all the things i worked into this one. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Lheriss
2023-10-12 01:06:26 +0000 UTCLoved the story. Liked the small hints you put in to the imposters identity and really loved the twist at the end.
Manga360
2023-10-11 23:09:26 +0000 UTC
