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Here's the reason for the thought of remix..

  I was rewatching Max and Chief Sajanto's scene, and as much as I loved it... there were so many lost opportunities because ideas came late. Also... there's this part of me that feels like I could do a better job at it. As if the original version was like a rough draft, a part of me... feels like it hasn't quite reached its full potential.

On top of that, there's that part of my brain that won't let go of the how things could turn out had one of the other chiefs been Max's first and how that would play out. So the more I thought about it, the idea came to me...

Chief Sajanto, the other chiefs, Coach, what if they were all different timelines with the same origin?

Basically some of the old Blackedwell Academy ideas with the characters I have on SFM, but instead it's Blacked to the Max because it's all told through Max's narration. Again... Chloe and Cole, I'm not changing it. Maybe the intro to fit this new concept, but overall... Chloe and Cole, still happening. With that being said, you never know... Max might also board The Cole Train too.

Also... before I start on Blender.. doing this will give me a big year's worth of Interracial Life is Strange content to work on. So here's the idea I have...

3 main timelines... Does Max keep in touch with Chloe since moving to Seattle or not.

If she doesn't, the story begins with Chloe and Cole, then that opens the door to the Majika, which also would give me a chance to flesh out more Majika Lore in the background. Also, I sorta like the idea of what if one of the other girls, like Brooke or Kate ends up with the Majika.

Now... this timeline does split... one where Max ends up with the Majika, which can have 3 different possibilities depending on who takes her virginity. But, I think that's if she follows Jefferson's lead.

However, she could also follow Chloe's lead, which have Max end up going into sex clubs, gloryholes, or possibly losing her virginity in other ways. Like taking a stranger back to her dorm room. In this case, Chloe is upset with Max for not keeping in touch, she's trying to find humiliating ways for Max to lose her virginity and possibly expose her to Warren.

Now the only timeline that stems from if Max did keep in touch with Chloe. If she does, this is where we'll get Chloe OF timeline where Coach is involved. Now... Max, and all the girls are losing their virginity to Coach in this timeline. But Max will have have multiple different ways, at different times when she'll lose her virginity with the Coach. It could be during a threesome with Chloe and Coach, or one on one in private, one on one in front of Warren, or during an all out harem orgy.

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The Majika timeline will still be there. If anything, I'll have more time to let the Majika lore grow in the background leading up to Max making her way to the Majika Empire and getting deflowered by either of the Chiefs. Also, this way I'd also be able to flesh out each of the Chiefs as well. I'd also like to expand on the concept of the Spear of Fertility, and add more creative concepts to the Majika, also... I'd like to give each chief not only their own different location of where they'll have Max, but different rituals in their virgin consummation ritual. It'll be a fully Max centered story no doubt. Everything will be from her point of view. Even if we see the other girls, it'll serve the purpose of tempting Max. But Max seeing one of the other girls with the Majika empire, I think that'll happen in the alternate timeline. Max realizing she missed her chance at something great. I doubt I'll do the whole derogatory talk, it just didn't feel natural. I do want a timeline that's a bit more darker that does involve a bit humiliation. I do want to put Max in sleazy encounters. Also, I want to include other male characters I haven't used yet. But, I won't involve talk with dudes calling Max a "bitch" or anything like that. More if anything, it's the circumstances that is humiliating, the situation that she's in. There were a few concepts that I wanted to do, but just couldn't figure out how to make it fit. Also, I sorta want this to be more of the Max doing stuff behind Warren's back without him knowing. I really wanted to do an adult store thing where someone is flashing Max, tempting her... but I just couldn't figure out how to make it fit in the grand scheme of things. So this timeline would be the only timeline where Max is in those situations. As for Coach, ever since the Chocolate Daddy video... I've been itching to see Coach and Max go all the way. I know other artists have done it, but I've been itching to do it myself. But, it'll be Coach as Coach Jay Daddy... gonna have to rename the other Chiefs besides Chief Sajanto. Also... with the other two timelines will heavily have Max with multiple other guys, so Coach's timeline will be more of a one man having a harem focused timeline with Max joining that harem. Coach will have his own story of how he ended up in Arcadia Bay. Yes, the concept of Chloe and her OF will be the premise of this timeline, but told through the perspective and narration of Max. So yeah, I'm not taking anything away... well maybe the thugs talking trash to Max part. But if anything, I'll be expanding on it more.

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I actually liked the way it was so far (and I'm not saying this because the chief is named after me :P ), but I get your point that more ideas came to your mind on how things could have been even better in hindsight. Firstly, it would be kind of a downer for me personally though if the whole Majika plot was dropped or heavily curtailed in order to make (please don't get this wrong) "yet another Coach / Cole encounter" of which it feels like there are already a dozen. The setting, atmosphere, progress to get there and execution of the Majika storyline felt very refreshing and new and that's what makes it so good in my opinion. The mysterious setting and not knowing how it will unfold (both in terms of the actual video and the character development in-lore) makes it so interesting. Also, even though it doesn't seem to be the case according to your description, I hope the story won't go "full rewind" back to the original setting you created in a demo video about two years ago with a gang of thugs who talk to Max in a very derogative way – as this kind os setup is absolutely not my thing at all. Now the idea of the other chiefs having a go at Max's virginity would be very interesting though, particularly because (if I remember correctly) I was the only one in the poll back then who actually voted for the hunter chief to deflower Max (the reason was the increased possibility of her getting pregnant :P ). While I assume that you have more thoroughly evaluated plotlines for each option by now, all the different paths are still endearing to me. Also, having other girls do the "Majika experience" is also a really nice idea. I still hope though that Max will remain the central character here. Now, as for the second option, the whole sex club / gloryhole / orgy might turn out to be somewhat repetitive when regarding your previous and future projects, which is why the tribal setting was so refreshing and new and hence endearing (I know, I repeat myself :P ). In the end however, I understand that the more you (the creator) like the ideas of what you are planning, the more motivated you are to follow through with them, so no matter what you will decide, I will fully respect it. I just wanted to give you my personal opinions and views on the different options. Maybe you will come up with more details that so far have not been done several times before to make the "no Majika" path more interesting for me and those who thinkthe same way as me. Given your creativity, I barely doubt that you WILL come up with something nice in the end. :) Anyway, I hope you don't mind my small critcism and no matter what you will do eventually, I'm looking forward to see results. :) EDIT: I almost forgot to mention that weaving the different options into Max's ability to rewind time is actually a really great idea that goes in line with the LIS lore. :) If you execute it in a way that each path is an actual possibility, then I'm very excited to see how it will unfold. Maybe you should still consider doing one path at a time and not all of them simultaneously, so we don't have five or six (numbers are a little exaggerated, I know :P ) plotlines that are unfinished forever, but instead put your effort on one timeline at a time (pun intended :) ). I think that way the results will not only be faster, but also more well-structured as you don't have to do "time line jumping" in your head every day when doing all of them simultaneously. :D

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