Knot an Egg: Page 1 Edits
Added 2023-02-20 14:55:47 +0000 UTCI made an attempt to follow Thruster_Check's criticisms and age the coop a bit. Added some lines for wood pattern, and dirtied the textures a bit. Also added chicken poop. :p It's the only thing they make more than eggs. I put in the 1st page before the edits as well if you want to see the difference. Touching the page up also made me realize I had a color layer off for the first panel.
Comments
Yes, better. I think what makes me see 'new' in it is that all the lines of the building are perfectly straight and/or parallel; an old(er) chicken coop wouldn't look that perfect.
Thruster_Check
2023-02-20 16:52:53 +0000 UTCGood edits I think. It definitely looks more "lived".
Suel
2023-02-20 15:25:32 +0000 UTC
