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Undercover Betrayal - CH.7 - PART 2 - STANDARD EDITION

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Undercover Betrayal - CH.7 - PART 2 - STANDARD EDITION

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Wow, thank you so much for the comment and for taking the time. It's people like you that keep me passionate about what I do πŸ’œπŸ’œ

MrSweetCuckhold

The initial idea was for the comic to last less, but then seeing how much people liked it I had the opportunity to make Ashley's corruption more gradual. I can't say an exact number, as long as I have ideas and the story doesn't get too boring, I'll go ahead.

MrSweetCuckhold

And a question to the author - how close are we to the end of the story. Obviously there will be an eighth part. And what then - one or two parts and the end?

Antony Yry

The seventh part turned out to be very intense - there were unpredictable moments and quite predictable and readable ones. Again, a very good combination of Ashley's internal struggle and the victory of depravity. And here are the two best episodes of all seven parts so far! The part begins with a scene with Chris and the subsequent sex scene. But what a sex scene - she gives him a blowjob and at the same time Nick calls her - Chris makes her answer the call without interrupting the blowjob! The first best moment of the chapter inside - Ashley boiling with anger at Chris inside and through depravity coming to the conclusion that Nick is her main love of life! Outside - enjoying the process, despite internal resistance, she manages to calm and dispel Nick's suspicions. A positive result achieved through corruption and pleasure and resistance inside. It seems like a small victory, but its achievement came through an even greater defeat in the struggle with herself. Cool idea - excellent execution! Separately about Chris - he acted as a client and a plot tool for the development of the heroine's depravity. I wonder if the author is hiding something more behind him? A small intrigue, however, which may lead nowhere. Then the preparation for the infiltration of the club - everything is quite predictable - a detective moment is noteworthy, where Ashley notices the same contraceptive in Olivia's house, which she takes herself, on Hector's instructions. Noticed, but no conclusion was made and postponed? - a good detail that says who the heroine is by profession. The infiltration of the club also goes predictably successfully and Ashley falls into a trap, receiving a horse dose of TMJ. (It's hard not to guess that the infiltration will not go according to plan, but the injection could well have been unexpected, but not for everyone, I guessed). A teaser of the boss of Nirvana through a call - this is good, we are waiting for him to appear, it must happen. But after the injection begins the second and so far the best episode in all seven parts - Ashley's hallucinations! The author here killed several birds with one stone in this segment - Ashley is covered in tattoos and looks like a complete "typical" whore. I don't like the idea of ​​many tattoos, but I liked the final result - the best in my opinion is the pink gun on the right leg located at the same height as the rabbit on the moon - a tattoo on the left leg. I am very glad that the author managed to satisfy the readers' requests for this point, in such an elegant way - and show an excellent result, and work out this request. Ashley's pose on her knees, with her hands cuffed behind her back and chains coming from her nipples is very symbolic. This is both a whore's pose and a punishment. Ashley's inner thoughts are designed in a very original way - the accusations come to her in the form of those whose trust she did not justify and failed - Olivia, Chris, the police captain and Nick - her inner cry "I'm not a whore!" does not sound convincing, because she is a prostitute and a whore. I like the author's work with Nick's character - of course, he is first and foremost a repeatedly deceived cuckold, but the fact that Ashley's inner voice and self-preservation instinct came to her in the form of her husband is both brilliant and... logical. It seems that both the deceived cuckold, and the weight of the character and the importance of his hero for the story and Ashley are not lost - her love for him is not lost, although it is repeatedly spoiled and betrayed by her. Nick is her support and one of the cores of her personality. Another excellent author's idea and filigree execution. Hallucinations are the best episode in all seven parts so far! Bravo to the author! The conclusion of the seventh part takes place on a high note and I completely did not guess the development of events - Ashley manages to escape and even resist the effects of the drug for some time (the author shows with such details that she is still a strong personality!), she manages to get to Hector's house. How many doses did they inject her with lol? Apparently TMJ gives not only a heightened thirst for sex, but also superhuman strength - she kicks down the door! Hector, although an asshole, quickly turns the situation to his advantage - dominating Ashley, he makes her beg for sex. Then we have a scene, a long sex scene in time, where Ashley expands her horizons and crosses a new line for herself - lesbian sex, and I must say she crossed it without any resistance. (The second girl is beautiful) Justification at the end to herself that this is the last time - this is another triumph of her depravity. The end - Ashley receives a box "with jewelry" from Hector and goes to Nick. Hector gets another photo for the collection. So far, these photos are proof of his vanity and victories. A full phone number of these collections with different girls. But they are also a plot weapon that should already fire! Or not? In general, a wonderful part, with a little readable in the middle. Best wishes for luck and inspiration to the author!

Antony Yry


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