Elvira's Monster Ball - page 2
Added 2023-11-11 20:04:03 +0000 UTCI love this page. There's a visible leveling up from panel to panel in the environmental lighting. I want to refine the process some more but it really stands out, to me at least, as a proof that experimenting and refining can have incredible results. Fuck around and find out isn't always a bad thing.
Comments
You gotta do something with that Wednesday Addams character
Kyle Allen
2023-12-07 19:26:19 +0000 UTCYes, the atmosphere is impeccable and I love the variations in lighting for each panel.
Hammertyme
2023-11-14 21:35:46 +0000 UTCThis ranks among your most creative pages yet! Terrific artistry on display! The atmosphere is impeccable and with so many characters, it's incredible how you've done them all justice.
Hammertyme
2023-11-14 21:28:42 +0000 UTCBlade and Vampirella π
Superman
2023-11-12 12:59:09 +0000 UTCAmazing! Iβd love to see Wednesday and Lurch go at it! ;)
C___
2023-11-12 01:31:55 +0000 UTCOkay. Blade & Vampirella is an amazing match! Her titties are begging for it π. Also the moody setting for the 2nd panel is really good. π₯
Yank33
2023-11-12 00:00:33 +0000 UTCThis encapsulate your skills so amazingly! The colors, shading, shadows and so much more!
Animeplayer
2023-11-11 23:31:51 +0000 UTCCan we see more of Blade and Vampirella? π
JB
2023-11-11 21:28:42 +0000 UTCHawt Jesus and holy fuck the level if color awesomeness here is incredible! It's like 3 stories of hype cake stacked on top of each other! π π€©
MagneticEntanglement
2023-11-11 20:58:26 +0000 UTCYeah, this is peak. I particularly like the way you draw the eye down from panel to panel by doing from light to dark, but also the slight storytelling in the palette, like the second panel being so warm and red in tone and color to fit the vampire gag. Also...your writing here is fine! You capture that wry campiness that comes with writing Elvira, and the jokes work well with the visual gags. Overall, it's just a really beautiful page and work of comics. I don't think people really fully appreciate the level of sheer artistry that you invest in your work. Yeah, it's erotica, but that doesn't mean it's not also ART, and GOOD art AND craft. Frankly, this looks better than a lot of stuff that's being professionally published right now (though obviously, this is a LOT of work by one person over several months, rather than a couple of people to turn around 22 pages in a month or so), and certainly better and richer than a of erotica. Great work as usual!
ForeShadow
2023-11-11 20:18:40 +0000 UTCπ
MAX502
2023-11-11 20:17:53 +0000 UTCLove the banner and puns
Lord of Debauchery
2023-11-11 20:14:11 +0000 UTCIf you step back and look at the page as a whole the panels (especially the third one) look like little paintings. Bravo! Bravo! The dialogue made me smile too.
MeinFischer
2023-11-11 20:13:16 +0000 UTCLove how each panel brings their own/unique atmosphere, like telling a dif story/chapter of something bigger.
Ashley Kate
2023-11-11 20:08:07 +0000 UTC
