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Black Mamba sketches

I worked with a fan and writer/artist on a story involving the housewives of Coxville County, by the name of Moon. The story ended up producing some early sketches of pages for a full blown comic. It was a long story and shortly after starting the pages I realized this comic would be several years of invested time and I lost motivation on continuing it. Regardless I still think it's some of my favorite sketch work.I'm breaking up the first 7 pages of sketches into tiers for patrons to enjoy. First 3 pages for 1$ tier, 2 more for 2$ tier, and 2 more for the 5$ tier. I'll be uploading another Jessica and Holli pages later tonight and a new character pinup after that.


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Comments

OH MY GAAAAWD!!! I just looked at all these and HOLY SHIT!!! PLEASE Give us color on these, PIT!!???

WLWatcher

Pit needs a manager

Kmccoy166

Did you scrap the Jessica and Holli page you mentioned? I hope you can resume a great working pace.

Ronin22

Wait, in this comic it says that Ivana marries coach black!? Is this canon? Could we see how that ended up happening? Wouldn’t Jenny have been jealous of that cause but here she says she’s happy for them? Will Jenny find a man of her own to marry again?

Omegalock

Please please more with HoCC except the pages don't span the entire story.

Ronin22

Aaaw. Shame there's no plans to release a comic from these. Like someone said already would be great even if it's for future projects. They're awesome.

Maddie B.

Sometimes the sketch is enough. If it was a project that you just couldn't see yourself finishing, then yeah... the sketches will do. Hell, I still think that sketch animation of Blossom from the Bimbo Bomb Girls was about the hottest thing I've seen. If, however, a lot of positive feedback makes you look at these and say "Hmmmmm... maaaaaybe there's something there." then run with that shit!

Dave

Would also love to read the full story that goes with these pages!

The Hunter

I hope you finish the sketches you have. Maybe finish it up as a comic with a sex scene. I’ve been wanting to see black mamba for awhile ever since I saw the pinup for it. But honestly I’d also like to know the story between Jenny and whoever the guy is at the beginning, is that coach or someone else? I kinda find her daily life interesting lol

Omegalock

If a huge story would take years to make the comic with, maybe let the writing carry out the plot and you can make pinups with dialogue or single pages of juicier moments like you did with Slutwriters stories. Well since you already canceled, it's best to apply this to future projects. It looks great.

Ronin22

Looks nice, just take your time with it, if it's going to be long..

Don

Seems like an interesting story, is there any way to shorten it?... possibly make it a 10 page comic. I agree that ridiculously long story arcs can burn out and be tiring.

PSN: Kalil86

I am wholeheartedly with you, in your work and in your life as a man. Peace Man :)

Miguelito0

Where do we read Moon?

KAM001

Did Moon ever complete the Black Mamba story? And is there any way to read it?

Willmatic

Just sharing a few thoughts-- there are some talented and up-and-coming artists out there but your "Two Hot Blondes Bet on BBC" and "Two Hot Blondes Hunt for BBC" comics were arguably the BEST of their genre EVER. The five pages you posted exceed that potential because you've grown as a man and an artist in the years since you did them. Maybe look at this potentially great comic in the making as a page or a chapter at a time instead of War and Peace. How do you eat an elephant? One bite at a time. All the best to the best.

Mamrey5

Hey Pit did you do a Widowmaker pinup at some point? I just found one with your name tagged on it, looks like your style too.

Re-edit

I wish you would clean these up and color them and even do a short version of the comic. It looks like it would be great!

Deus

Dam pit you sure are an amazing artist man. Anytime you release something it’s always worth it. I’m glad to be part of the PIT army and pretty sure everyone else feels the same. 🙏

Jonathan Bravo

Dang, it'd be nice to see how this comic finishes. Great work!

boobman21

Pit you absolute madman

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