The Inner Nature P2
Added 2024-11-12 15:09:16 +0000 UTCAfter being betrayed by Reina, Momoka ran away and found herself a lifeline when she is on the edge of death...
Will this event change her own personality?
Thank you very much for everyone's support~
I hope everyone will like and enjoy the story XD Please let me know what do you think about the stories~
I'm currently in the Mid-term exam week, so sorry for the lateness of the story~
Comments
Momoka is the GOAT
Ranginald Vagel
2025-01-12 06:20:47 +0000 UTCI will see about that~ Thank you~~
Hanako Shizumi
2024-11-25 01:06:11 +0000 UTCCould I suggest putting Marin kitagawa or Galko in this story Hanako
Kid369
2024-11-24 18:52:12 +0000 UTCOkay~ I will do my best to XD
Hanako Shizumi
2024-11-13 09:07:14 +0000 UTCIt's nothing XD
Hanako Shizumi
2024-11-13 09:06:33 +0000 UTCThanks~ I'm glad you like it~
Hanako Shizumi
2024-11-13 09:06:24 +0000 UTClove all the ideas presented here. The tan idea was brilliant and its a good visual to show how much control she has over the given body. Yes links to previous works would certainly help the reader get more immersed and enjoy the story telling and development. ^^ keep up the great work!
SOMO
2024-11-13 09:01:27 +0000 UTCAbsolutely loved this! Thank you so much my friend!
Slay Lord
2024-11-12 21:13:05 +0000 UTCvery nice do like some of the directions you've going when it comes to the character designs and such like breast expansion and belly bloating in some of your stories. as for tan or not not sure both look good could maybe used as a indicator of how much in control the tan girl is controlling the host body/s so if not tanned she is letting the host have more control while if tanned she is taking more control or something given she seems less malevolent then the other spirit girl so might be fine with giving her hosts more freedom though i could see this possibly having unexpected outcomes as well at least with certain hosts such as if the host is particularly compatible or something also may i suggest if able to post links to the earlier parts in series so that way can find them easier especially if its been awhile since uploaded stuff to the series or its a longer one
Kots
2024-11-12 20:46:43 +0000 UTCYup i like tan version
Evening Abused
2024-11-12 19:23:38 +0000 UTCi hope you enjoyed~
Hanako Shizumi
2024-11-12 17:19:45 +0000 UTCPart 2 is super!! Great job! The struggle for survival and her finding her way. I cannot wait for part 3!! ^^
SOMO
2024-11-12 16:58:39 +0000 UTCI'm glad you like it~
Hanako Shizumi
2024-11-12 16:25:53 +0000 UTCThank you so much Hanako, this part 2 is so amazing! I can't wait for the part 3! XD
Makimaji
2024-11-12 15:50:50 +0000 UTC
