Raven Animation // Teen Titans (commission)
Added 2022-01-22 23:45:30 +0000 UTCTwo versions, which one looks better? I am not an expert in animations so any feedback is more than welcome.
Comments
Overall 1st one is better
RICHARGER
2022-01-23 19:22:56 +0000 UTCI think that the breasts should be more bouncy or at least have a more smoother bounce to them if you understand what i mean.
RICHARGER
2022-01-23 19:21:50 +0000 UTCAgreed
Mach.Kick
2022-01-23 02:02:43 +0000 UTCKeep going your getting better the first one has improved since the last animation
2022-01-23 00:52:37 +0000 UTCthanks, I was thinking the same about the blinking xd, I'll keep it in mind for the final version, appreciate the feedback 😁
Raydon XD
2022-01-23 00:23:18 +0000 UTCThe first one is smoother and has an overall better feel
Darkendlink
2022-01-22 23:53:50 +0000 UTCDon't line up the blinking of her eyes with her other motions extend the time between blinks give them there own rythm the body doesn't do many of it's automatic motions in sync, also you have a very good idea of motion with her arms moving a second before her breasts follow the movement so just refine those two areas and you should have a better grounding before moving on to other parts of the animation.
Redd
2022-01-22 23:50:06 +0000 UTC
