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Raven Animation // Teen Titans (commission)

Two versions, which one looks better? I am not an expert in animations so any feedback is more than welcome.

Raven Animation // Teen Titans (commission) Raven Animation // Teen Titans (commission)

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Overall 1st one is better

RICHARGER

I think that the breasts should be more bouncy or at least have a more smoother bounce to them if you understand what i mean.

RICHARGER

Agreed

Mach.Kick

Keep going your getting better the first one has improved since the last animation

thanks, I was thinking the same about the blinking xd, I'll keep it in mind for the final version, appreciate the feedback 😁

Raydon XD

The first one is smoother and has an overall better feel

Darkendlink

Don't line up the blinking of her eyes with her other motions extend the time between blinks give them there own rythm the body doesn't do many of it's automatic motions in sync, also you have a very good idea of motion with her arms moving a second before her breasts follow the movement so just refine those two areas and you should have a better grounding before moving on to other parts of the animation.

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