The first one is a commissioned redraw, character Adagio Dazzle from My Little Pony, what do you think improved or no? Also the Suu one needs something to be better idk why Includes:
Adagio Dazzle// MLP:EG
Suu // Monster Mosume
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It's hard to tell at first glance, but yes the new Dazzle is an improvement. There are a number of stylistic enhancements for facial features, hair style, and accessories. As an example, improvements to her top include getting the straps to rest closer to her collarbone, and the center tie is more proportionate. How about actually sketching cone-shaped spikes for her hair binding instead of triangles? These differences take a moment to notice, but clearly show an artist who's grown in talent.