SkyHorn Adventures - A remade page

Sorry guys, I have to postpone the new page to tomorrow, in the meanwhile I post a page from my re-composition of the previous panels in a comic layout. Enjoy!

My statement about replanning the previous panels in a printable version of SkyHorn's Adventures isn't an empty promise. But I'm working on that, giving priority to the new pages, of course.

Here you can see an example of what I'm doing: the remade page and the same segment of the story in the original panels.

As you can see:

1. Two panels are preserved, although the proportions are modified and a lot of empty space just cut out.
2. An entire panel has been drawn from scratch. I needed something that could fit the vertical space left, and I wasn't happy with the rendition of the original panel. The pose looked unnatural, the lighting wrong, and the faces of the brothers too inexpressive.
3. A minor panel has been added that shows the Warmth Spell, spit out by the Redhead, cooking the monster lobster. It gives a more fluid dynamic to the scene.
4. The new design details, tattoos and scars, have been retconned in the previous scene.
5. The format has been adapted to the European style comic. 

That's a pretty average example of the work you will see in the printable version. Some pages will require just the composition of previous panels, some will have to be entirely redrawn.

This version will be hopefully ready in a month or less, for $3+ patrons, in the meanwhile I will search for a reliable print service to start selling a printed version.

I know, it's like when Toei Animation releases crappily animated anime episodes for the TV, and remakes them for the Blu-Ray releases. But at least I'm not a cruel Japanese company that exploits its employees and abuses its fanbase.

I'm just a guy, I change ideas and forget things. Then I try to make up.

Side note: in the reworked panel the legs of the brothers look very short, but that's made on purpose. Those feral humans have shorter legs (or bigger torso and arms, it's a matter of point of views) but the occasions to draw them in a way that shows that are very few :-P