rickleone

The Hunter - Second and current try

Added 2019-08-18 16:57:36 +0000 UTC

Summer laziness is drinking my blood, so I keep posting my old works.

This one requires a bit of introduction: the second attempt at The Hunter, with a rebooted plot that puts the evil Greekish Empire in the main thread from the very start.

And it was a bad start too. A lot of action without explaining anything about characters and motivations.

But it looks even more intimate and I liked conceiving the relationship between Ulf and Vidar as two antagonizing, but caring, fathers of a pack of teenagers.

I want to go on with this story, it looks very personal, with a very noticeable shift in rendering and rhythm of narration. A shorter but denser story that should take something like 200-250 pages, with a lot of fantasy elements and daddy issues.

Would you like it?