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Hound of the Dead Chapter 16: Schemes Part 3

Not beta read yet.

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We all know Cu's ending up with Rei, Saeko, Kyoko, Shizuka, Fumi, & Momo at least lol possibly more. Like Igou's mom for example lololol on a side note if she's alive and Igou's dad died I could totally see Cu accidently seducing her lol I think that should be an omake for sure.

Slyvannis

Simon is a dead apostle I know 😝😝jajaja

Neopolitano

Great chap but I’ll be honest I like Saeko better than Rei

Loveburgers

Great chapter

Mega230

Hm, I was mostly going for Cu basically abandoning the idea to continue fighting after he feared he went too far and Saeko basically triking him. And then he overpowers her physically and traps her. Reading the scene again, I can see there are some areas that could have been expanded further that would have better showcased the fight. I already did some quick corrections and improved some scenes. Hope that helps. Cu was mostly just having fun and playing with Saeko.

NimtheWriter

mmmm Cu losing with a spear.... That's just disappointing, I hope we get an omake of his teacher making fun of him, honestly he even used his superior physique and still got beaten fair and square. I feel like I'm in a fever dream.

EA2016

Thanks for the chaoter

Thomas Brantley


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