Fake Familiar Reborn Chapter 22: Holy Sword Part 2
Added 2024-05-01 16:16:59 +0000 UTCFully beta read by Paragon of Awesomeness, Shig
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Wait, the stalking part was mostly her just staring at him far too closely or intensely during classroom iirc. Archer doesn't really have much of an opinion on her yet and is mostly respecting Rias' decision since it's the same girl who insisted on having Issei in the group. So Kiyome in comparison wasn't really that big of a deal. But I see where you're coming from, I do feel her interaction in the past chapter could have been more expanded upon. So I'll be working on that. Thanks for the feedback!
NimtheWriter
2024-05-30 20:32:16 +0000 UTCso this is the 4th time u brought up Abe Kiyome! the first is when sona failed to contract her repeatedly. the 2nd is when archer said she was practically stalking her! which apparently he forgot. the 3rd was last chapter when rias said she may be joining. and now she just joined and archer forgot all about that again...
Sean Robbins
2024-05-28 10:28:14 +0000 UTCGreat chapter
CanSerBero_1
2024-05-10 23:25:16 +0000 UTCI could have sworn in a previous chapter Emily's had already been told by Rias that she was attempting to get Kiyome to her Peerage, with him even noting that Kiyome's response was almost like that of a typical Japanese polite refusal. Was that edited out, given he is acting somewhat surprised here?
SilverIceRing
2024-05-05 14:16:08 +0000 UTCThat Emiya doesn't want a familiar makes me think he should get one. Kiyome is almost completely not explored in fics. Should be interesting. Not sure how he will react to the fragments but at the minimum he will not be impressed at all. Hopefully he will sense and prevent Kiba from doing something stupid.
SsanghwaSilver
2024-05-05 06:06:17 +0000 UTCVaya, me pregunto cómo será la primera interacción entre Archer y kuroka, será pelea de hermanos mayores o kuroka querrá unirlo legalmente a la familia xD... Kokabiel contra dos servants uhmmm no creo que esa pelea dure mucho.
Luis Enrique Salazar Carrasco
2024-05-02 23:05:34 +0000 UTCThis story is always amazing and I am very much looking forward to this upcoming arc. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Cody
2024-05-02 21:52:34 +0000 UTCI almost forgot to say thank you for the ch and the second one you plan on releasing.
paladar blade
2024-05-02 09:38:16 +0000 UTCAnd que everything south. Archers about to meet the exorcists, and given this is before they take a chill pill I sense much sass in the coming chapters. There's also his opinions and reactions to Creed, Galelli (probably spelt his name wrong) and Kokabiel. But the most important part is whether or not he'll be able to put up with what's become of this worlds Excalibur. EMIYA may not have many things he still holds dear but just about anything related to Saber even after all this time is something he holds very close to his heart. (Well what's left of it anyway)
Ryujin Jaeger
2024-05-02 07:50:52 +0000 UTC
