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An Archer's Promise Chapter 47: Aid

Fully beta read by Shigiya, Maglad and Fluffy S

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Will be in a few hours along with chapter 48, currently reworking some scenes with the help of a few beta readers.

NimtheWriter

Not fully beta read yet?

Deathknight134

*Olga immediately gets paralyzed (again) after sh*t talking our boi* You got what you deserved.

Joshua Leahy

Olga and Chloe ended up watching the lemon scene unintentionally and that part is amusing. And Claudia is unknowingly walking into a horrible trap due to her having no clue about the fallout. Ironically, Grave’s impatience could also be his undoing as he has no clue about Vault’s death. His actions could be the trigger that reveals Kuroinu’s treachery. Wonder what the fallout will be like when that fatal piece of information is revealed to the Seven Shield Alliance. Time to tear the Kuroinu to more pieces so this will be fun. When you make a beta correction be sure to not confuse Grace with Grave and vice versa.

Brandon Chong

Great Chapter. Olga and Chole being force to watch Archer and the elf duo do it was funny. Hopefully Claudia can escape her fate. Things are a bit here. But her being tried is a problem.

And that one beat down I really want to see

DeadLee

He got two elf babes in the sack. Archer for the win. The part with Olga was amusing, her being angry that she had to sleep on the ground like a normal person. Can’t wait for someone (Archer) to put that old man in his place; six feet under the ground. Do hope he lays into Alicia, seeing as she’s a giant cunt who thinks she knows best.

The Storm Master 567

YES!! Archer has gone and scored with Anna and Grace and Olga was unfortunately forced to watch was funny. Hope to see some fan art of Anna and Grace someday.

Benny

I can't wait to see how Archer is going to confront Alisa about her inability to actually take care of her people. Hell I half expect him to go off on every single one of the princess knights. Given however long Archer has existed (we have no idea, eternity can't exactly be measured) he has seen the best of kings to the worst of tyrants (and probably put swords in them both. God I'd hate to be stuck with his job.) Point is a confrontation with the seven I feel is unavoidable. I'm inclined to believe that should this happen... Well at least we know that he is more than capable of throwing tactical nukes into people's faces at point blank range. (Looking at you Heracles.)

Ryujin Jaeger

Hope the asshole get what he coming

Lord of Debauchery


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