1st To Love a Sword art commission (NSFW)
Added 2023-01-20 02:44:21 +0000 UTCYo, how are y'all doing?
Welp, this certainly took a while to be be done.
The artist had a lot on their plate to finish this early on and coupled with it being December last month... Safe to say that there wasn't much alone time for them to finish the work with family around.
Thankfully, it's done now
What u think?
It's okay, honestly, I'd give it a 6 or 7/10.
What do y'all think about it?
Made by Annoru.
Edit 1: I'll add the download file soon
Comments
If they had an issue with her being completely nude they could either use the steam cover route or make the tail more realistic in covering. Honestly, they could've gone with the first sketch design and just changed the tip orientation from the left to the right and that would've looked more realistic.
Doraemon
2023-01-21 00:03:58 +0000 UTCDefinitely good thing there was a black image first lol opened this email up thinking it was a chap at first with my fam at the dinner table lol closed it fast like a sexy pic from the girl lol
Brian Jenkins
2023-01-20 16:37:18 +0000 UTCThe tail is more of an S shape. From the past sketches, the artist made a different shape with the tails going sideways. But in the final version, they mentioned how they changed to shape as they felt uncomfortable with having Lala completely nude from what I understood. But I can see how it may look weird from afar. Hmm, I can check with the artist to see if they're willing to change the shape to more of a C. That is, if they accept it.
NimtheWriter
2023-01-20 14:03:40 +0000 UTCThe tail looks very weird. How is the tip connected with the rest of the length to the butt? It looks as if it goes from the butt then goes through the hand then loops back up the arm then somehow teleports to a different place from said arm.
Doraemon
2023-01-20 13:46:07 +0000 UTCYe, it was accidental but now I like the idea. Gonna keep it.
NimtheWriter
2023-01-20 02:50:07 +0000 UTCNo, the first image is black for me too, but I’m guessing that might be intentional since the image is NSFW. Act as a buffer in case someone looks over our shoulders while we’re checking e-mails.
Bookwyrm
2023-01-20 02:49:20 +0000 UTCMight be intentional, like an NSFW spoiler. EDIT: or that.
2023-01-20 02:48:00 +0000 UTCOops, selected it by accident, there should be 3 pictures. Edit: nvm, I've put it back since I like other's idea.
NimtheWriter
2023-01-20 02:47:47 +0000 UTCNot sure if it’s just me but the first image is just a black screen for me
SageGodVerhar
2023-01-20 02:46:25 +0000 UTC
