Question from author
Added 2022-01-16 01:05:29 +0000 UTCIn my last few chapters I've been changing pov between a lot, especially with the last chapter.
I wanted to ask, does that bother you? I just feel the Issei reactions are kinda hard to write in Hachiman pov only. Difficult but doable.
So do you think I should re write the lates chapter mostly in Hachiman pov or leave it as is?
Comments
You're right about the bad vibes, currently writing Chapter 28 and unlike the last few ones, this one gonna reveal more of the past and it's consequences. How it affected Hachiman. Asia will also appear in it.
NimtheWriter
2022-01-17 14:17:22 +0000 UTCAfter i read the fixed newest chapter i got some bad vibe for the future of the story, if asia gonna be the part of the harem then it gonna be yabai for issei character dev. Love him or hate him he is the red dragon empor. And with rias not part of his story anymore i think asia is needed to draw out issei power for the later part of the dxd story
NekaOwO
2022-01-17 14:15:10 +0000 UTCSorry can't really recall off the top of my head but it if you were reviewing your chapter i think you probably already fixed it cuz i was reading most chapter before chapter 22 as soon as they came out, and i just have a quick revisit and didn't see anything that stands out.
Bob
2022-01-16 14:05:05 +0000 UTCOh can you specify which chapter it was? There can be mistakes that I missed to correct. Just now I noticed some in chapter 25 while reviewing it again.
NimtheWriter
2022-01-16 13:49:19 +0000 UTCI'm stockpiling the chapter to binge later so i haven't seen it yet, but from reading previous chapters i say the fic is more fun to read from many Povs but please do keep in mind whether u were writing in 3rd or 1st person cuz you did mix them up sometimes. Other than that i say yeah keep writing from different POVs.
Bob
2022-01-16 13:47:45 +0000 UTCI think that’s fine, I’m sure readers would like more 8man in the chapters.
Bryan Uy
2022-01-16 01:43:56 +0000 UTCWhat if the Hachiman part were more extended? Not for the next chapter but for the already existing one on Patreon.
NimtheWriter
2022-01-16 01:36:00 +0000 UTCI think this chapter was fine, but I’m sure others would like it to have the story go back to just being Hachiman. The other POV is fine, but I think some of us would like to just go back to focusing on Hachiman.
Bryan Uy
2022-01-16 01:32:54 +0000 UTCIt was good. I would’ve preferred a bit more reaction to hachiman basically dying for a bit but that’s just because I enjoy reading characters reactions to events. Was thinking you were gonna have a bit more of a I guess surprise from Akeno like a short pov flip when she hears him say I love you too over the phone; but again I like reading reactions.
Dustin Dubbo
2022-01-16 01:24:50 +0000 UTCHow did you find the last chapter to be? Chapter 26: Guilt?
NimtheWriter
2022-01-16 01:16:06 +0000 UTCThought it was fine this chapter; was a bit dull the chapter with mostly Issei; but that’s just because it his thoughts seemed to be mostly non-essential filler like calling hachiman names or fantasizing. If there’s actual moments for reactions then it dosent feel bad.
Dustin Dubbo
2022-01-16 01:13:41 +0000 UTC
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