Page 4! I meant to post this a few days ago. i'm further along than this. Some problems at the dust farm. Maybe a few things get established in the chaos.
Its actually becoming a lot quicker for me to go
Loose thumb > more refined sketch > colour
than
Loose thumb > sketch > inks > colour
Basically finding an inbetween for refined sketch and ink. I tthink it may help it feel more alive.