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August Pinup - Tough Love [+story] HD

 Hey guys! Here it is, the finished piece y'all voted on this month. A fun little in-character interaction with Nytro and Vikna.

Their relationship is a unique one in my story setting, kind of love-hate in a way... I struggled with dialog and what to include. There were really too many options and I didn't want to weigh it down. It was hard to pick what best summarized the situation. In the end, I saved out one version with no text, one with a bit, and...I uh...typed a short erotic story to go with it.

This isn't easy for me! I'm not an experienced writer. I think I'm decent at diction and vocabulary, but maybe with a history of writing porn sometimes, I could mix it up with a character-driven one...I dunno! I'm confident in my art usually, not my writing. But it was fun to do, I'll admit. It helped me form the atmosphere of the image a lot better, and I could fit much more into it than text on the picture.

If you guys enjoy it, I'd consider adding some snippets and other short write-ups to other images when possible. Hope you all enjoy both!

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/vkgf45qqmnfzj6w/AAC4hvF38KoEqs9ulkPtvedRa?dl=0

August Pinup - Tough Love [+story] HD August Pinup - Tough Love [+story] HD

Comments

This story was unexpected! Good job, Fluff! You really captured the moment in words as well as art. Even is this won't be a regular thing, the addition is welcome!

Deciem X

Thanks! Haha, noted!

FluffKevlar

Thanks! Happy to hear that!

FluffKevlar

Haha, thanks! I've seen it around, less so wth furry art on average probably because it was so difficult, and it's very situational. Sub-surface scattering. It's more a flesh thing. Thanks!

FluffKevlar

I liked the story.

WraithWolf

The lighting on this one is pretty great, really emphasizes that they were too worked up to find a proper room and made us of the closest adequately private space available. The story section was actually pretty good too! If adding more story segments to these kinds of illustrations is something you'd be interested in continuing on in the future, I'm sure there's some folks around with writing experience who would love to help out either with editing or with writing stories featuring your characters. *cough-cough*

minoan

What a beautiful piece! The detail and lighting here is eye-catching to say the least. I enjoyed the story too.

Chamomile Sheep

A beautiful picture all around, but I gotta say my jaw fell open when I saw Nytro's ear. You actually made the membrane transparent with the strong back light shining through, enough to see the outline of the veins. That is just the coolest thing, I've never seen any other artist do that!

Diamondstorm

Oooof yes i was hoping to see these too lewd after that strip game

Melon Frost

thank you! i would be, im sure!

FluffKevlar

thanks! i tried, haha

FluffKevlar

Yay, finally something to enjoy on this bloody day *w*

Foxyfox

Dang! It wasn't my first choice, but a prose piece to go along with the art? You're really going the extra mile.

Not Telling

I really like this one. Great job on the lighting and atmosphere! The story was a nice little addition, I'd love to see more stuff like this if you're up to it.

Foxovh

thanks man!

FluffKevlar

thank you!

FluffKevlar

thanks!! im pleased to hear it

FluffKevlar

thank you!!

FluffKevlar

most definitely is!

FluffKevlar

aw, awesome! im glad

FluffKevlar

thank you sir!

FluffKevlar

thanks! im glad to hear!

FluffKevlar

Super loved the story to go with! Would love to see more!

The story was decent. It gave me a much better idea of not just the scene, but their personality and character, and that's something I really like. The little details such as their thoughts in the moment, their movements, etc, etc. It all builds to a better understanding. A picture is worth a thousand words, but even just a hundred words can sometimes convey an idea better than a picture alone. Don't sell your writing too short, Fluff. I'd be more than happy to read more of if, and it'll only improve if you continue to do it.

Silvador

What a blessed upload 🙏

BinChimkinAU

How were you able to view the story, for some reason it doesn't work for me?

Antoine Davis

These two are adorable Fluff. <3 Man you have got to hold the record for the highest number of genuinely attractive OC's. Keep up the stellar work man we all appreciate what you do.

Duster

man this pic is just soooo very perfect! the story is great Fluff!

The Friendly Deathclaw

Fun little story! It provides a nice lore/background for the stunning image and a more in-depth look at Vikna's and Nytro's personalities and their relationship. I'd definitely love to see more short stories from you in the future.

Zenith

Looks awesome, great job! Also, the story file doesn't work.

Antoine Davis

Its amazing fluff! The story really was a nice read, I love it when you worldbuild and their relationship is unique and pretty interesting to see! Don't knock your writing you do just fine, and I would love to see more story with you pics, at least as long as it's not too rough for you to do, you already do so much for us after all.

ExtremistLine

Ah yes. The tsundere.

cittran genericlastname

Awesome, love those leg locked moments.

Skyler_darkwolf

Wow. This came out so well! I think it's my favorite pinup you've made yet!

YoungRiles

Words cannot do this picture justice, its absolutely beautiful! And the short story is pretty great to boot as well! The lighting on this piece is stunning especially <3

Blobage

The fic was pretty damn good too

Bespin

Super hot

Bespin

That was a great read!

As an aspiring writer, that was a lot of fun to read ^^ This piece turned out really great, especially with the lighting on their fur. I love those twilight our colors!

Ahawk95

And who said cats and dogs can't get along? XD

Gorehound

Stunning! Definitely a lot of thought, effort and emotion put into this one. 10/10

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