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Predators of Denali - Page 39 [sketch] (update)
Added 2020-03-07 10:20:08 +0000 UTCHey guys! Back, settling in at home, and trying to roll back into the swing of things. I've been alternating work on the comic and pinup, it's been harder than usual to do so, and I've struggled some, but I think I got this page, and Isabelle into a better state.
I have probably hinted at this page for a while in some ways, but Bailey was always going to find her way back into the mix. I think she's got her own strong personality and desires here, mostly to help Tala, but I'll be damned if she doesn't get some prey herself, too.
(update/edit) - So a few comments and messages later, thinking to myself and re-reading this comic thus far, I feel I've moved too far ahead on the storyboard. You guys really like Bailey, but you also like the Tala x Massak development, and the more I think about it the more I've decided to revisit/rework this page and shuffle some cards around to let that pan out, and keep Bailey but in a different fashion, and bring her back into the others after they've had at least a 'full round' to themselves.
So, sorry for the kind of 'step backwards' so to speak.. I just want this to be as best as it can be, and while I know there were a lot of comments enjoying Bailey back, I think I have an idea in mind that will have things be a fun combination of both routes.
Comments
Gotta admit I can agree to the extended Tala x Massak scene. At this early a point Bailey jumping in would feel kinda...idk, rushing it, in comparison to how they've been taking it so far. I like the change. ^^b
ZRO4825
2020-03-10 08:17:47 +0000 UTCUltimately the direction of the comic is up to you, but I for one would like Tala and Massak to have a full round alone to themselves. They really make a cute couple, and watching Tala gain confidence in herself and her desires has been a warming experience. Bailey is great but I don't feel like she'd let Tala go at her own pace like Massak would.
Diamondstorm
2020-03-09 02:36:45 +0000 UTC(update) Sounds great! Thank you for the consideration =)
Burgafrickle
2020-03-08 23:28:56 +0000 UTCYES, threesome!!! (Eventually at least, right? I can imagine Bailey talking Tala into things she was either shy or reluctant to do by herself)
Fuzzwood
2020-03-08 05:19:20 +0000 UTCYay, Bailey is back!
Skyler_darkwolf
2020-03-07 23:44:42 +0000 UTCTo add-on because I thought a little more on it, and apologies for the negative criticism, but I solidly don't like Bailey showing up this early. This basically puts this comic at two interrupted sex scenes in a row. Reading through it all at once again, the tone whiplash is pretty noticeable. And the coming pages will include what I'm predicting to be Bailey loudly and bombastically asking Tala wtf happened and who this dude is before they settle down and explain things out and she agrees to join them to continue Tala's first time. I'll just reinforce that I think it would be better to actually flesh out and finish the full one-on-one with Tala and Massak, then have an emboldened Tala do the explaining and initiating once Bailey catches up later.
Volpethrope
2020-03-07 22:07:56 +0000 UTCGotta say, I'd actually prefer more alone time with Tala and Massak. I like Bailey, but her personality definitely changes the tone from what it's been so far. The softer, tender tone only covered Tala's nervous first time taking the initiative and briefly trying to suck him. I was hoping to see the gentle one-on-one stuff continue into her full first time, then maybe see Bailey in the morning for 3-way action with a surprisingly more confident Tala. I'll still like wherever you're taking this though.
Volpethrope
2020-03-07 20:45:41 +0000 UTCC-c-c-ock Blocked!
2020-03-07 19:51:10 +0000 UTClol
Grizzly Gus
2020-03-07 18:51:11 +0000 UTCYes! More Bailey!
Richard Awesome
2020-03-07 15:38:03 +0000 UTCBailey almost looks like shes Talas wolf mom. So stream Sun?
Ladies Man 7777
2020-03-07 15:37:17 +0000 UTCYes! I was hoping to see my favorite girl of yours again!
Q
2020-03-07 14:39:31 +0000 UTCHahaha time for that double team. Prepare thyself.
2020-03-07 13:48:08 +0000 UTCOh yes! Both best girls taking on the sheep, bring it on!
Ahawk95
2020-03-07 13:23:04 +0000 UTCIt's wonderful to see Bailey again but I must confess.. my mind has now INSTANTLY wondered to an image of both of them going right back to what Tala was doing before. It's a lovely image.
Jeff
2020-03-07 12:58:13 +0000 UTCI would have like some more alone time between this two
Skeleton Man
2020-03-07 10:51:51 +0000 UTCWell, Bailey did have her nose buried pretty deep between Tala's legs, and Tala was pretty worked up when she left. My guess is, Bailey probably just followed Tala's scent.
Silvador
2020-03-07 10:46:48 +0000 UTCWas she.... outside the whole time?! XD
Silvador
2020-03-07 10:45:35 +0000 UTCSo this looks awesome so far, also yeah i was wondering when Bailey would find Tala but how did she find her exactly? But yeah, this page looks awesome so far.
Antoine Davis
2020-03-07 10:35:29 +0000 UTCOMG OMG OMG :D
Kaizer
2020-03-07 10:27:51 +0000 UTCNice
Kyu-Art
2020-03-07 10:21:14 +0000 UTC
