Predators of Denali - Page 23 HD
Added 2018-10-09 14:01:01 +0000 UTCPage 23! Ended up actually taking longer than I thought it would thanks to some of the backgrounds and making clarity out of the flow and some imagery, but I like the result. Hopefully nothing's wrong or missing. Tala is having some issues here; I thought she was supposed to be passive and against hunting? Oh well, I'm sure this will all go just fine.
Link is valid til next month, here is the full comic thus far:
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/sgbh72fgdi78fpm/AADBfnRO3c_4G_DOhPKxnSBga?dl=0
PS. Also to note; unrelated, but I've decided against doing an 'Inktober' type thing this year, if it wasn't apparent already. I weighed in on it the first few days and decided it'd be better to spend my time towards advancing the comic, and side pinups/projects that I already said I would do, and I don't like already falling short on so many smaller promises.
Comments
The iditarod?
Sakalis
2018-10-18 22:14:45 +0000 UTCMuuuuch better. Yeah that makes more sense. You CAN Run for hours at a time, but sprinting not so much. Now her catching a scent and tracking it that far? totally more believable. Keep on the good work.
Spartan277
2018-10-11 04:14:09 +0000 UTCNibbliest of nibbles!
Thunderclap421
2018-10-11 03:47:10 +0000 UTCHaha, no, just prey! I'm hoping to make sense of it soon
FluffKevlar
2018-10-11 03:20:46 +0000 UTCThanks! I'm glad that came out okay
FluffKevlar
2018-10-11 03:20:24 +0000 UTCThe biggest nibble!
FluffKevlar
2018-10-11 03:20:14 +0000 UTCThanks!!
FluffKevlar
2018-10-11 03:20:08 +0000 UTCYeah I think sprinting was a bad word choice on my part. I meant just 'running' in general whereas I didn't think about that sprinting is too exhausting. I think it's more important to imply distance rather than time, so I've changed the dialogue to be more in-tune to distance.
FluffKevlar
2018-10-11 03:11:13 +0000 UTCSprinting for hours? .. erm... Ok.. honestly that seems ..way unrealistic in any setting.
Spartan277
2018-10-10 07:45:34 +0000 UTCDam. You've really captured the instinctual/feral side of things with her. Is the aurora flowing from her eyes just visual effect or is there actually some form of energy showing from her eyes that is noticeable by others?
Silvador
2018-10-10 02:38:49 +0000 UTCI love the huge turnaround this comic made. This is awesome!
2018-10-10 02:24:09 +0000 UTCThose eyes. Actually kind of scary.
Not Telling
2018-10-10 01:07:05 +0000 UTCWell-hung sheep dude incoming!
DJ
2018-10-10 01:00:12 +0000 UTCThis took a wonderful turn
Anonymous Trashbag
2018-10-09 21:45:41 +0000 UTCThat would also be funny, but not yet, Haha
FluffKevlar
2018-10-09 20:28:12 +0000 UTCIm pretty sure we are talking a diffrent kind of prey. I mean hours of sprinting for one specific type. Im guessing its not food. Or is it? :3c
NitroToxico
2018-10-09 20:04:44 +0000 UTCyeah the eyes are diffidently cool.
WhiteGlint211
2018-10-09 19:40:08 +0000 UTCya the aurora effect on her eyes was a rely neet idea!
2018-10-09 18:27:24 +0000 UTCI like the aurora effect around the eyes
The14th
2018-10-09 16:32:15 +0000 UTCSomeone's gonna get the nibble.
Thunderclap421
2018-10-09 15:53:00 +0000 UTCLooks great. Did not expect this from the wolf girl ( I forgot her name I'm sorry!)
Pics50111
2018-10-09 15:19:34 +0000 UTCSomeone's gonna get their bum bit. :3
PhyreFox
2018-10-09 14:05:05 +0000 UTCWow, this looks scary and awesome at the same time. Also its okay about Inktober, i understand that you have a lot to do, so its alright. Still, this page turned out great.
Antoine Davis
2018-10-09 14:03:27 +0000 UTC
