Predators of Denali - Massak v2
Added 2018-07-05 20:01:00 +0000 UTCHere's a quick update for y'all; I wasn't 100% behind some parts of Massak's original design, mostly his outfit. A few minor changes to his face, like brow shape, an actual mane like a sheep SHOULD have, and more defined, shapely markings and ears, as well as not going totally nuts with the fluff, and keeping him a bit more tidy and handsome yet keeping the fluffy important parts like heels, shoulders, mane, etc.
As for outfit, the previous one was far too 'typical' loincloth and tribal. I used more researched and appropriate shapes, colours, patterns etc. for Tala and Bailey, so I did it for Massak as well. Something warm and comfy, but 'easy-access' and not quite as 'covered up' as IRL native area clothing, given that well, they do still have fur.
Overall, I'm much happier with these tweaks, and if you're curious and want a quick comparison to the older version, I've linked below. I wanted to make him more appealing and ready for his intro in the comic. Would've hated it if I figured this all out after he already showed up. WHEW
Comments
He's certainly handsome. Really looking forward to seeing more of him.
Not Telling
2018-07-09 06:00:30 +0000 UTCVery carefully :v
FluffKevlar
2018-07-07 01:08:38 +0000 UTCAh, perfect, haha
FluffKevlar
2018-07-07 01:07:59 +0000 UTCBDE = Big Dick Energy ;)
Acrid Rose
2018-07-07 00:54:38 +0000 UTCBDE? not sure what that means but he'll definitely be sizeable. Compared to Tala it will definitely be size play a bit, but both Tala and Bailey will have shots at him and together. He'll have his own shape just like my other males, I don't think you or the readers will be disappointed
FluffKevlar
2018-07-07 00:51:08 +0000 UTC... how does this dude WALK?!?
firandor
2018-07-06 21:00:26 +0000 UTCI know previously you mentioned you plan on him being loki sized in regard to how hung he is but lemme say this: Massak here has way more BDE then Loki ever had. There is no excuse for massak not to to have outrageously more girth than Loki (too much length works for no one). We're talking the size of his own forearm minimum. It's only fair i mean. If it messes with the flow of the comic or your plans for tala (if she is gonna x massak) then by all means do what suits the story. I mean at this point it's the bailey show and i'm all for it honestly. Love your work man
Acrid Rose
2018-07-06 15:38:55 +0000 UTCI see. Either way I love the look overall!
Thunderclap421
2018-07-06 05:57:40 +0000 UTCI'm glad you think so! :D thanks
FluffKevlar
2018-07-06 05:03:48 +0000 UTCThanks man! Happy to hear it!
FluffKevlar
2018-07-06 05:03:31 +0000 UTCI still don't know honestly, but since males so far haven't had them, I am leaning towards not, also partly because he has a humanoid cock
FluffKevlar
2018-07-06 05:03:15 +0000 UTCI have no preference on them or not tbh, I think it just makes the ref easier. I think in comic he'll just be hung
FluffKevlar
2018-07-06 05:01:34 +0000 UTCYeah he'll empty them quite a bit :v
FluffKevlar
2018-07-06 05:00:43 +0000 UTCThanks a ton! I'm glad you agree!
FluffKevlar
2018-07-06 04:56:53 +0000 UTCA little cleaned up yeah!
FluffKevlar
2018-07-06 04:56:21 +0000 UTCThose some very large balls, Fluff. Methinks there's an intent to get things messy, hmm? x3
UltraFennec
2018-07-06 00:23:21 +0000 UTCLooks good and attractive to me! :V
iceFox
2018-07-05 23:52:07 +0000 UTCHis fluffy balls look tidier. :o
Kaizer
2018-07-05 22:02:47 +0000 UTCThat man is straight up attractive.
KCDodger
2018-07-05 21:01:44 +0000 UTCI approve and look very forward to his introduction. :D
Silvador
2018-07-05 20:35:17 +0000 UTCDefinitely an improvement on the original concept. His overall design (his physique, outfit, colors, and demeanor) is extremely appealing. Fantastic work and I can't wait to see him make his debut!
C-Fed
2018-07-05 20:29:59 +0000 UTCHe is one tall boy~ Im loving his design, cant wait to see him in action :3
Skeleton Man
2018-07-05 20:28:56 +0000 UTCMe likey. Pretty meh on sheaths myself but the rest of him is....mouthwatering!
Thunderclap421
2018-07-05 20:26:15 +0000 UTCGlad to see you went with the sheath, since I remember you were debating whether or not he would have one for a while.
minoan
2018-07-05 20:10:29 +0000 UTCOh yeah! Those small improvements really make him way more sexy; it is totally all that fluff. You really care a lot and that is why I love your work. Chirp on my feathery friend.
Kenith Fox
2018-07-05 20:09:06 +0000 UTCWow, he looks great. I like the added details and what you said about his previous outfit was true, though he still looked cool in his original outfit i still like this one too. Still, Can't wait to see him in the comic.
Antoine Davis
2018-07-05 20:05:09 +0000 UTCOh my goodness! He is very attractive!!!!
F'yacin
2018-07-05 20:04:40 +0000 UTC
