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Predators of Denali - Page 14 HD

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Page 14! Tala and Bailey are well on their way. This was a fun page, with some fun backgrounds along the trail. I also tried to simmer down the dialogue, hopefully it feels tighter and more refined, more relevant and helpful. We're shifting out of the buildup phase. Most people get the story, characters, and goals, which I hope weren't too boring to trudge through, so now it's about time things -happen-! Enjoy!

Predators of Denali - Page 14 HD

Comments

I just became one of your patrons.... I know I'm way late to the game, but where can I find your complete comic series for your patrons?

Aw, thank you :D I'm very happy to hear that!

FluffKevlar

After binging the first 13 pages of this comic I can say I genuinely love Tala. Part of me hopes she finds a nice, kind-hearted guy up in the mountains; someone who will whisk her away from ol fuckface Kiga. But then part of me hopes she'll stay single and innocent. I dunno, guess I'm just really looking forward to the rest of this! :D

Diamondstorm

Well I mean, I'm not gonna dedicate a whole page to show the entire dying process, haha. She just washes her hands in like, a river afterwards? Or something.

FluffKevlar

waaaait a minute.. wouldn't her paw be dyed from using it like that with the dye as well?

Spartan277

Gorgous work as always fluff, never regret waiting for your new stuff <3

shadowstarthe1st

Thanks man, glad to hear it!

FluffKevlar

Haha, thank you!

FluffKevlar

wow are some beautiful backgrounds Fluff!! amazing *-*

Skeleton Man

Boring? I'll have you know that a good comic has both compelling story and "action" *cough* fucking *cough*. Yes it might be long. but I'll take more pages than less, even if most of it is not "the good stuff". Also, I like how Tala and Baiely are bonding on their trip, perhaps they will "bond" even more ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°). I am sorry to say though, my favorite erotic novel is still 'The Lusty Argonian Maid'; you have some growing to do! tehe them loafs don't bake themselves. Edit: oh I forgot, that is totally a cute color of orange for her hair!

Kenith Fox

Yeah, this comic is awesome so far.

Antoine Davis

Aww Tala is just toooooo cute. :O

The Friendly Deathclaw

To me it was worded in a way that sounded different from Earth, also that in the first comic Rehzi said earth. So i thought Terra ment something else, my bad.

Antoine Davis

Me too.

Antoine Davis

Love the hair!

Kaizer

Seriously, how are people not getting that "terra" = "nature"?

Silvador

Please, PLEASE add the backgrounds on their own in the zip folders. :D That scenery is GORGEOUS!

Silvador

......yeah..

Antoine Davis

Also, in the first comic on the first page Rehzi says "Why on this good green earth did i sleep in?" So yeah this is Earth, in which that's why i said that maybe Terra is something or someone that Baiely knows about.

Antoine Davis

Really loving the character development. Sexy times is icing on the cake :D

I'm guessing Terra is just how they refer to Earth

R S

Okay, this is beautiful. I really like the backgrounds and details, also i noticed that Baiely said "Mate" but yet earlier on Kiga said "Wives" in which they're somewhat the same yes, but i wonder which one should be used? I guess both are fine it's just something i noticed. Also, i don't mind the story, characters and goals being too long, in which it helps the comic and gives more to it. I like how you give Tala hobbies, in which i would love to see one of her paintings, also i would like to go fishing with her, it gives more to her personality and her character. Also, sorry for Bailey about her mom, but I'm glad that she's alright. Also, i agree with Tala about "Lifting tail for just any male". But yeah this page is great, can't wait to see more.

Antoine Davis


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