Predators of Denali - Page 11 HD
Added 2018-01-06 11:45:04 +0000 UTChttps://www.dropbox.com/s/559fa611r0zu6mg/Predators2page11_HD.png?dl=0
Here's the finished page! I quite like how this one came out overall. Tala looks good in the center, Bailey's expression amused me, and grandma i think looks good too. More of her on the next page or two. Tweaked dialogue, cleaned up balloons.
Enjoy!
Comments
I'd assume she's standing in front of an Lava Stream ? Don't bind me down on it though
Rahirrah Krasker
2018-01-07 16:10:09 +0000 UTCSo now that it's colored and clearer to see, I have to ask what's actually going on with Tala in the first three panels, is she sweating just from nervousness or is she in something like a sweat lodge? It looks kinda like they just poured water on like, hot rocks if I'm not mistaken. Oh and as for Bailey's accent, the 'sugarpaws comment a few pages back kinda makes me picture slightly black-Southern maybe? Well awesome page regardless, still love the "AWW HELL NAAAW" X3
ExtremistLine
2018-01-07 02:37:06 +0000 UTCi'm still not sure on her accent tbh. irish is one idea, but i havent thought about her voice too much. maybe black-irish?
FluffKevlar
2018-01-07 01:09:13 +0000 UTCthanks!
FluffKevlar
2018-01-07 01:08:26 +0000 UTChaha, close to it, yeah
FluffKevlar
2018-01-07 01:08:21 +0000 UTCSince Bae'li has an Irish accent, can you have her say something along the lines of "for f**ks sakes man, what's wrong with yea?!" At some point in the comic? Haha!
Evangellos
2018-01-06 20:18:28 +0000 UTCThat's a pretty good surprised reaction!
Bionet
2018-01-06 19:25:23 +0000 UTCi love bayley's reaction xD
Saitumex
2018-01-06 17:17:42 +0000 UTCHahaha I laughed the first time she said oh hell no and I laughed this time.
2018-01-06 15:50:38 +0000 UTCAwesome, the shading looks great and amazing dialogue.
Antoine Davis
2018-01-06 12:51:13 +0000 UTCYou did a good job here, excellent expressions :D
KHVathiel
2018-01-06 11:55:53 +0000 UTCI swear to god I heard her going all "AW HELL NAW"
Kelanich Santovedis
2018-01-06 11:55:42 +0000 UTC
