Predators of Denali - Page 8 HD

I'm actually not super into it either, hence why it's so rare in my work, haha. But I'll see how it goes!

FluffKevlar

Oh. My. GOD. Bailey is hilarious. I never would have guessed her personality would be like that, XD

Kraton Haddock

Now that I read what you wrote, I agree it would be way too early for a sex scene. If a story is just nothing more than endless sex scenes then it really isn't a story and isn't worth my time reading it. No offense Fluff!

SCPilot

I would say to continue with the story, that way people can see them more and understand a lot going on. A F/F thing would be too soon, in which it should just be F/M/F, in other words building things up to lead too it instead of going straight into that, for it would make it worth the wait instead of just having things jump to that at random, so yeah basically Tala and Baiely should just remain friends in which they talk instead of a F/F scene. For this part it can be a serious moment for Tala in which she talks about what she has to do and her past instead of just having sex out of nowhere with someone she just met literally at least a few minutes ago under a table. Basically, just wait till they get to Massak. But still this is amazing.

Antoine Davis

No it would be too early. I don't like stories that are just endless amounts of sex scenes. Just continue the story please.

SCPilot

Ooooh. I would love to see some lesbian action with these two! Some licking, sucking, fingering, and kissing to boot!

I feel it's good that we're seeing more worldbuilding and character interaction. Having an F/F scene could be entertaining, but if it comes at the cost of pacing, I'd say continue with the story first.

Bionet

HOT LESBIAN ACTION!

Kaizer

some action between these two before the main scene would be amazing! hope it happens

Termin8t0r

I'm one of those weird straight guys that isn't super attracted to F/F... But I'm sure at least some of your audience would appreciate at least a light teasing session like Volpethrope suggested.

LifeWulf

Some light action between them could be cute. Maybe more teasy and quick, as I'm assuming the intention is Bailey helping Tala relax before the ceremony? Not a full-blown, drawn-out sex scene like what we'll probably get later with Massak. I'm mostly curious how you're going to resolve the issue with Tala and her chieftan, since he basically told her she's too weak to be respected and he plans on raping her into pregnancy since she has no other value to him. Even if she's successful and "proves herself" here, he still had those intentions. Ending this chapter of the story with him still having authority over her will leave an awful taste in my mouth. Here's hoping she elopes with Bailey and Massak or something. ;P

Volpethrope

The two characters with the best hair

pountach

You did amazing work on those expressions, the emotions are catched great and conversation is amusing and serious at the same time. Great page Fluff, really like this kind of world building... and I don't see problems with F/F, Tala gotta start somewhere :D

SVKwolf

Enjoyed!

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