Predators of Denali - Page 4 HD
Added 2017-08-09 01:21:26 +0000 UTCHere's the latest from Alaska! Tala and the wolves, led by Kiga, sit down to discuss some things, which will likely be covered in pages 4-6 before we get down to business and set off. Thanks to you guys who commented on the dialogue and other stuff from before, I like how it flows now, I think, much better.
I'm trying to do the artwork more sensibly from here on out, particularly regarding the word balloons; both in style and placement. Previous pages had the word balloons in 75% opacity, which let some of the artwork show through, but I felt it also made things harder to read, and I definitely don't want that.
So that, coupled with panels and their artwork being placed in a more appropriate composition where the balloons aren't taking up as much space, and consolidating dialogue, this page has %100 opacity flat white balloons, and I'll go back and make tweaks to pages 2 and 3 as well, which will be apparent when I send out the ZIPs at the end.
Comments
I know that this is a bit late, but I'm glad that we're able to see male and female characters. Cause in Pok, Rehzi was the only male character that is a Gazelle. Is there any art of Gazelle's that're male? But either way this comic is amazing.
Antoine Davis
2017-08-09 05:37:21 +0000 UTCMe too, i would love to be friends with her.
Antoine Davis
2017-08-09 05:14:43 +0000 UTCI like eclipse as a measure of time, especially because of the one coming up :D
Stalizar
2017-08-09 03:43:09 +0000 UTCWe're only four pages in and every one of them has made me want to give Tala a hug, poor girl feels like a doormat.... Also can the bear wait until AFTER the meeting is over? I think we can all suspect what's going on >_>
ExtremistLine
2017-08-09 03:08:17 +0000 UTCIs he getting some attention under the table? If yes, that is SO HOT! Hope it's his daughter, too. >:D
Silvador
2017-08-09 02:57:54 +0000 UTCEveryone gets one guess!
FluffKevlar
2017-08-09 02:40:20 +0000 UTCI bet I know what's causing his strange noises :P
Skellitor301
2017-08-09 01:57:05 +0000 UTCLovely!
Nexus
2017-08-09 01:25:16 +0000 UTC
