Cats Can Fetch, page 15 HD
Added 2017-03-15 14:12:36 +0000 UTCI had the sketch for this page done by the end of last month, so didn't take too long to top it off. While it's supposed to end abruptly in an amusing way, my self-critical side has me hoping it doesn't come across as lazy, it's just how I had it intended since the beginning.
The more predictable route would've taken a few more pages, maybe had her knot him, bigger finale, etc...but that's just been done so many times. I thought it would be rather funny to follow through with the 'interruption' lead-up. Hopefully it still flows nicely..? I can't exactly call a do-over, but hey, still new to this and wanting to try new stories. Just one more page!
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"Why are you naked?" "Who is that chick?" "Why is there cum leaking out your ass?" ... oh ... Oh ... OH ... O.o
2017-03-16 03:00:01 +0000 UTCIt just cuts to Lia Twix; skips ahead a few minutes. They chat for a little and leave on a good note. I, personally, think it works, but I'll try to finalize the sketch and post it soon to let others see it too. Thanks!
FluffKevlar
2017-03-15 23:40:17 +0000 UTCBeing that this is Nytro, I don't think he'd need an explanation at all. He'd probably just be peeved that they didn't check room reservations first.
Riverweasel
2017-03-15 21:41:38 +0000 UTCThe cutting short of it is fine with (and funny to) me, this comic was never really my thing in the first place.
Spartan277
2017-03-15 18:27:07 +0000 UTC"Hi Twix" Like he didn't just walk in on his friend completely undressed with a chick.
Heretic Morgan
2017-03-15 18:24:58 +0000 UTCHaha loved the comic, glad you went against the grain in the end.
2017-03-15 17:11:03 +0000 UTCSeeing a knot would've been noice, but the last panel is funny XD
iceFox
2017-03-15 15:32:39 +0000 UTCThe only concern I have regarding the narrative at this point is if only one page can meaningfully address Lia and Twix's new relationship without seeming too aprupt compared to the lead up. The interruption by Nytro at least seems to have a sufficient buildup given the people trying to access the room earlier on, and Nytro being called in on the previous page. I guess the big question is if time is spent on Nytro interacting with the two, or if there is an immediate cut to afterwards and the focus is kept on Lia and Twix. Also this page is pretty hot but that goes without saying at this point.
Bionet
2017-03-15 14:58:49 +0000 UTCHaha I love everyone's eyes in the last panel. "... Hi Twix"
Conduitry
2017-03-15 14:26:02 +0000 UTCGonna be rather long explanation, or he just might join them *wink wink :3
SVKwolf
2017-03-15 14:23:21 +0000 UTCahhh man..... Wanted the KNOT the tension and build was THERE.
Big Tony
2017-03-15 14:18:03 +0000 UTCI am not gay, but kinda disappointed that she didn't knot.
Kelanich Santovedis
2017-03-15 14:14:49 +0000 UTC
