After a bit of tweaking to both art and dialogue, here's the refined, finished page 1, and the new page 2. i also titled it finally! I think it fits, and should match the expected content later in the comic, I'm guessing it to be between 12-14 pages, which means I should finish at the end of the year or so, if it all goes well. Hope you'll be enjoying it as much as I am! I had fun with these pages via world-building over porn, mentioned a few things, not everything will be covered, but it's there.
Attached web-res files.
GizmoDrawz
2016-08-25 03:39:43 +0000 UTCDrakoWerewolf
2016-08-24 08:36:11 +0000 UTCKelanich Santovedis
2016-08-24 08:36:02 +0000 UTC