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Butcher of Gadobhra Chapter 557

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Niglet, from Niggling: slight annoyance,...a made up word for a small, insignificant goblin, since 'snotling' is copywrited. If we've gotten to the point where using the letters NIG in a word is bad, sure, can change it.

Michael Clark

To see that part of the faire had been given to a ragtag group of brownies, goblins, and niglets was bad enough.-_ i implore you to pick any word other then "niglets" ...not sure what the could even be a typo for. He waved to them and to the overly polite guards as he pulled his wagon through the town, Finally parking in front of a tavern that everyone else was ignoring. No cap needed on Finally. "By skipping a nap and giving anyone a chance to find him, he was pulling his wagon through the streets of Wolfsburg before the sun came up" I'm thinking this was < "without" giving anyone a chance to find him, maybe? He spent the next six hours carefully cully the pens /culling "What, preposterous! What did this mortal do? Beat the king at chess? Recuse a princess who gets lost each Tuesday? -rescue, i think final edit: No one has every had a shop like this, selling fresh meat from such ferocious creatures. -ever While i'm here, thank you for the generous output, i'm rabidly in love with both series

Mike Powell

“convections and cakes,” Confections is the right word

Alexander Dupree

Tank oo fur da chap!

Engineer4God

Two typos: "carried in in Hefty Bag" and "know. we have" the we was supposed to be capitalized. Good chapter, thank you.

NameGame

Dear upset Fae Lord, do yousee the extremly powerful High Fae Duchess everyone was afraid of? "No she is dead, some mortal killed her" Mhmm, very good, that you remember. Now please ponder what might happen, if someone was to harrass the merchants employed by said mortal...

Felix H.

If it weren't for the portions available Ozzy would be running one of those novelty butchers that sells Gator, Kangaroo, and Emu next to the full sized shops.

Exrotes

This dragon's Balloon builsiness seems like a perfect handling Scheme

Owen Kaz

This dragon’s balloon business seems like a terrible halfling scheme.

Daniel Zellmer


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