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10.34 MGF

I have decided to let ducks eat as much bread as they wish to. Also, this is half of the original chapter with copious edits. (54,880 Words)

https://wanderinginn.com/2025/02/16/10-34-mgf/

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This was a great chapter. This was fun. This was new. We get to see a world, not just a character, of “i accomplished my dream but what cost”, of rags being able to do the philosophy we heard her say so many times and how they would play out. Rather than repeating old scenes. I didn’t comment last chapter where Marsha met Zel cus I was just going through the motions with that chapter and character specifically. While I liked the pawn stuff and the different characters coming through I also think this is becoming too messy. I was tired of the akin to rehashing/ maybe horizontal growth but I do enjoy horizontal stuff I just didn’t with remeeting zel and maybe moving him to a different door. I don’t care the fixation about zel n tkrn in situations we already know them in. we are a gallion words in compared to when we met them and we kind of are rehashing similar information. I do appreciate learning a bit more about zel but i felt it was too much. Same with califor, lets see what happens with how this arc ends but I felt again that was way to long. I get it fits with the story so im fine but as a reader im like eh. I even went back to read chapter 9 instead of this latest chapter. Then I came back to this after a bit. And I’m glad I did. I rlly enjoyed it. Maybe it makes the previous chapters better? Not sure

PearsMan

Get well soon Paba!

Stady the Savior

Amazing Chapter as always!! I Believed we were going to hear Toren Mentioned in The Palace at some point.

Nosya Bankhead

totally loved that chapter

Martin Page

Well the ‘stronger’ is bit of a misnomer right? Lets say a baker: A level 25 baker that just chills in his hometown baking bread all day, vs a baker that fell into his profession baking for kings and doing baking-contests every day getting to lvl 25 in a year or so, is a less extreme example. Ceria wasn’t doing amazingly as a wizard. Also Mrsha went through an insane amount of things.. but her class is specific to these things surrounding the fates..

Quintuscus

Yay Fighta!

Splutty

Quack

Eldritch Murder God of Crochet

I know this arc is great in a lot of ways but the worst part of it is definitely that it distracted us away from the formation of Lyonette's inndom/innpire. Hopefully the marquin scene was setup for Lyonette forming the inndom/innpire soon.

Robert Mullins

Fantastic chapter!

Jordan

Feeling like a very happy duck. That was a phenomenal chapter!

Connor M.

it feels like we're near the end, which is sad. but in a few years it'll be an amazing read for audiobooks. it'll be brand new all over again.

Valmorian

I'm such a happy duck.

Gaspar Diaz

That final conversation is a perfect example of Pirate’s growth as an author. Such a deep and profound conversation, but performed between three beings that don’t understand the profundity of the topic. Unbelievably good.

JDespo

Great chapter, Im glad to finally figure out what that was about lol

Carter

Reminder for those who haven't checked the wiki or re-read in a while. Ceria was sub-level 25 until partway though volume 4. So Mrsha is 'stronger' than ceria was up until that point.

Robert Mullins

Amazing chapter ! Doesn’t feel at all like half of one. Thanks Pirate ! Quack.

zinwam

If you elect a goblin lord as quarass of germina will the combined memories of their past lives help balance out the goblin king rage if they become one?

Robert Mullins

That entire bit was great.

Kerrus Magrus

Fact: The leading cause of obesity in Ducks is Pirateaba

Ground Control

Bread!

PearsMan

*Happy quacking sounds*

James Ging

The actual duck in my dp has never felt so seen

CY

This duck wouldn't mind a never ending stream of bread, but it also understands the baker has to live.

Miguel Adolfsen

was about to go to bed! I checked patreon lots throughout the day.. time to stay up late, thank you for the chapter! who will cause the next breaking.

Valmorian

*Insert Duck Noises* Also Thanks for the Chapter Aba!

Dza9000

Yaaaa

Captdeth

My night is saved. I mean, quack. Seriously, I wouldn't be surprised if this joke caused TWI fans to be known as ducks

Irideae

I recently bought a relevant patch. It is the DTOM flag with a duck and the words "Throw bread on me".

Rico Anthony

I love that you split a single chapter in two and still wound up with a book length chapter.

Zach

Quack quack quack quack

Isaac Boyles

Quack quack mother truckers

thomas j walters

Anyone else having gateway issues? Might just be too many people reading at once.

Elliott Zajac

I am addicted to my bread. Quack : )

Dominik Zettelmann

Thanks Pirateaba! Although these short chapters aren't really cutting it. Need some more bread. Quack.

James Getgood

Awesome. I was worried you forgot it was a Saturday

Nik

Quack

Chris Fey

Thanks for chapter :D

TB


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