The Lady of Iron Chapter 17
Added 2025-06-13 18:34:16 +0000 UTCis here!
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I'll be handing it over to an editor friend before it's finally posted, don't you worry. Glad to hear you enjoyed it, though!
Ellusive
2025-06-13 19:56:24 +0000 UTCUpon first readthrough, I must say that this chapter is amazing. While there are certainly a few spelling and grammatical mishaps that will need tidying up, I found the chapter to be rather enjoyable, and helping progressing the storyline of the current arc. :) I love how you've added Xenephon in accompanying the Iron Band on their first campaign, and I can certainly envisage the man writing down his observations, interactions and philosophical musings during the journey. He would make a great chronicler to the early campaigns of Tanya/Theialagus, and I can certainly imagine him becoming an important figure in founding schools of learning in Lochos then all over Olympia. I also love how you're slowly expanding on the planetary background of Olympia (The Veilands, the Thanatosian Death Cults, and the Nighthaunters that roam in irradiated wastelands), and how they can be linked to the horrors of the Age of Strife/Old Night (A sort of twisted Classical Greece with all the Greek Myth monsters being real but with the familliar Warhammer horror undercurrent). I also find it somewhat enjoyable that Tanya/Theialagus is making notes of the landscape and the possible resources that can be utilised to restore Olympia to its former glory. I look forward to seeing where the story will take us next. TheHydra77
TheHydra77
2025-06-13 19:41:25 +0000 UTC
