Jack Premonition
Added 2024-05-09 10:50:46 +0000 UTCHmm... Yeah, I have no idea how NTRish or how far I could do this tbh....
Anyways, let's see how many people hate this premonition part. Otherwise, another rework. I will just try to progress main story. For NTR storyline that is.
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In general lots of ways to go about it. Her and Jack team up to where the supposed hero of the land turns his back and joins the villain. And I wouldnt say he dont anything to offer as having the hero on your side does have its advantages for villains. Keeps certain people off your back per say and also keeps him from becoming an eventual roadblock or problem that could get in her way. As sure she is a goddess but as we learned at the start she can be sealed away. Like think what GoGo loser ranger did made a deal with the aliens and it benefited both sides. She initially goes against him but then realizes he's more useful as a pawn then an enemy. Never have I seen a sex game do that but again u2u
BananaJezus
2024-05-10 01:04:31 +0000 UTCSayako is irredeemable though. This is why I am trying to work asap. It is practically someone else fault that she became pure resentful and really determined on changing the world. Practically that is what NTS storyline is all about. She got defeated and weaken which is.... I prefer her getting full power to be honest. A lot of potential. That futa on male or genderbended is the lightest I am willing to go. Because, let's be honest. Jack don't have anything to offer while Sayako have a lot of things to offer.
Paradox V
2024-05-10 00:25:05 +0000 UTCu2u but could have it to where he's seeing all the girls with dicks starts to panic and then Juno appears and warns him of the impending danger in a sense snapping him out of his panic and waking him up. But again u2u. True ending though can be whatever you want. Do Jack and Sayako forget whats happened before and in a sense join together, do you want one to lose and the other to win, lots of options
BananaJezus
2024-05-09 23:36:15 +0000 UTCThe second premonition will be Juno warning him about "Sayako". But, this is precisely why I have to focus on 1 storyline to be honest. Then, perhaps I just continue from the "true ending". Sure the characters went through some trauma but what I am avoiding is, story going all over the place. That is what I am trying to do currently.
Paradox V
2024-05-09 23:02:09 +0000 UTC"I prefer getting Sayako rather than.... Jack in this case to be honest." Sayako is also more exciting when she has become the Goddess of Origin. Sanako and Ayako will also be more excited about how they have to deal with the fact that they helped sacrifice Jack and Kana. Alice's reaction to losing her adopted children. "For it to be pure NTS, Sayako have to be defeated." I agree: the way Jack was at the end of Chapter 1, he disagrees with the Pure NTS about giving up Kana for fetish because he apparently wants to lose her and he definitely wouldn't seal Sayako. "that people had to use Jack again. Because, his story aren't finished yet." Makes sense, otherwise random elements could occur. Jack could do something offscreen that is too important for his development. For example, important Day OFF moments with the girls and Sayako (Sanako and Ayako) that persuade him more and more not to seal Sayako, if the player doesn't notice this, Jack's decision not to seal Sayako will be random. Another example that goes well with Yuki. If she manages, out of her own interest, to make life as a girl attractive to Jack and, with his consent, to make Jack in a girl in order to show him the advantages of girl's love. Then it would be very random if the player doesn't notice that and meet fem Jack are confusing the player. Not only the other party member's.
Sakui
2024-05-09 18:44:46 +0000 UTCIn NTR since this is a dream trying to in a sense warn him there are many ways to do it. You can have it to where its trying to warn him Sayako's a futa in almost a comedic way by having all the girls show up as a futa, you can use this one, or the one you posted April 29th. Heck you can use multiple premonitions at various times like someone is trying to warn him further about the impending danger. The first one Jack can ignore and think okay thats just a bad dream, but the next two is when he starts to think something may be up.
BananaJezus
2024-05-09 16:56:19 +0000 UTCI prefer getting Sayako rather than.... Jack in this case to be honest. For it to be pure NTS, Sayako have to be defeated. In this case.... She would get weaken all over again. Which, just burnt all the effort of building up until to the point of that 2 shard. So, yeah. Also, that's what happens when people complain about NTR. That NTS exists because of that. Like I said, I don't hate NTS, but talk no jutsu or anime arc redemption arc for Sayako don't work on her. She is that literal pissed and determined on her goals. But, I will just do a soft reset to.... "Reset" the girls, because I still want to stick with my vision that people had to use Jack again. Because, his story aren't finished yet. So, for those who want to play as Sayako have to wait first. That Paradise Island will be everything doesn't make any sense due to power scaling is off and Sayako full power for that part.
Paradox V
2024-05-09 14:34:50 +0000 UTC"It depends how seriously Jack takes it" Doesn't matter in a vision. Jack can dismiss it as silly and unrealistic or perceive it as a nice dream because he has sex with Kana in the dream/vision. Until the dream turns out to be a vision and becomes real and what Jack does then he gives in to the vision or not. It also depends on the context of the dream and the vision, how much information he gets to prevent it and how silly it is, in this case in the picture Jack wouldn't mind if it became real. "Jack will get a worse ending" For Sayako to perhaps achieve her goal, Jack would have to get a bad ending. For Sayako's goal, I think Jack's soul has to die without the body dying or at least Jack has to grant Sayako complete control over the body.
Sakui
2024-05-09 14:10:11 +0000 UTCYeah... At this point, it will be another copy paste of Takeda or any NTR artists tbh. I have no idea how original I could do this. I mean, in chapter 3, Jack will get a worse ending I guess? It really depends on how people see it. Hmm... Yeah, at this point everything is already not original. Even in that NTS I already planned for months in finding an original way, but, that's it. It is basically like Adelaide Inn or Warped Desires kind of thing tbh.
Paradox V
2024-05-09 11:29:08 +0000 UTCI mean it's-.. basically a dream?.. It depends how seriously Jack takes it- if he just writes it off as a dream that's what it is. If it's a vision he takes as an inevitable future that's really different.
D0
2024-05-09 11:21:03 +0000 UTC
