NTS sex scene in the working
Added 2024-05-01 07:48:47 +0000 UTCYes, I know I said I didn't working on it. Again, before I totally close chapter 1. I am respecting NTS fans. So, I will try to give what I can.
I am in a literal burnout. I know I shouldn't complain too much but yeah. I have been busy planning for that chapter 3, chapter 4 and Paradise Island. Not to mention, Patreon ToS bullshit since I really wanted to go hardcore.
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I know, I am stressed like anyone else. But no matter what, NTS will be the usual "Please fuck my wife" or "Please fuck someone while I watch". Which is unoriginal tbh. This is what I am having a headache about. Because it will be either of those one. I really tried to find something really original for NTS tbh. Really do, but it will be that. I don't want Sayako to be sealed either tbh. That's what I am trying to avoid, plot holes. For example, why Jack don't just seal her if he knew how evil Sayako is? Another perfect example is, why Sayako is biding her time? She can just try to manipulate everyone around her tbh. Again, I don't hate NTR. More to, I am trying control the main story from going all over the place.
Paradox V
2024-05-02 00:57:35 +0000 UTCIn general its your game and nobody will hijack it. Ignore the haters they just be silly. No need to jump to another platform just block out the noise and your fine. Like if you dont want NTS dont do NTS. You have your preferences and so far its worked for this game. You have done a good job so far and have a good idea for what you want to do in the future. Take your time and you do you. Like look at the guy doing SAONTR he has a patreon and never lets the people get to them. They do what they want and use comments more for bug fixes and stuff. Your good, like take Ani's example they just cruising through Futa Family without negativity get to them
BananaJezus
2024-05-02 00:16:25 +0000 UTCDon't misunderstand, I really appreciate D0 suggests tbh. I will fix that Kana hands later. I am thinking of a proper execution and finding a way to write this part properly for NTS. Like I said, I don't hate NTS. I need a proper time and think something original. While NTR, I am thinking of a good way to make it depressing. I am not really talented writer for it to be depress simulator tbh, >.<
Paradox V
2024-05-02 00:03:00 +0000 UTCI don't mind if people don't want to follow me tbh. All I want is just enjoy making the game and write the story of the game. Without some try to hijack the project. This is why I am thinking to jump somewhere else and have a peace. I know some tried to help and I 100% appreciate it. But, some said some.... really unhappy stuff which made me, okay. Discord have become a shit hole and a poison now. I just shut it down like some suggests. It's dead anyway. Like I said, some said don't rush. Then, I am not rushing and try to think a proper execution and find a proper way. I have been focusing on the main storyline this whole time tbh and avoid the game goes all over the place. Like I said, I only focus on current characters. I scrapped duchess daughter because she is not important. I mean, sure, more sex scene I guess? Paradise Island is the meanwhile thing and tried to bring back Joanna. But, I think I will just skip the story a bit, I think...?
Paradox V
2024-05-01 23:54:00 +0000 UTCThe issue is many people may not follow if you leave patreon and since you closed your discord you kind of do need to rely on comments for bug reports. You don't need to go to the extreme as what you have been doing is fine and your example of BDSM with Julie and Sayako is fine. As in the end what you have been doing is fine dont need to go over the edge. Simple stuff be fine. Like Kana with a collar walking in park at night or Julie and Sayako having a bit of BDSM fun, or Alice or Yuki blindfold action. Deepthroat choking or feet play is also fine within reason. Lots of safe options that dont break the rules. As by this point you dont need rape as it makes 0 sense for Sayako now to be going lets do it lul. All the girls are basically in the palm of her hand
BananaJezus
2024-05-01 16:55:28 +0000 UTCI like this pose and angle at least. One thing I would change is her hands.. they're too low on the bed to be turned that way- if you turned them the other way it would seem like she was either fucked silly or unconscious. (sleeping pills coming in handy?..).. But yeah- the wrists are awkward without being upside down or at least sideways i nthat pose.
D0
2024-05-01 15:37:01 +0000 UTCOk, I will take it out of my mind atm. But yeah, I like NTR gimmick, I mean, I do love, love shadow play. Really love it even. But my writing is meh, a pure meh. Because I have a really high standard for NTS and NTR even. Because, my current game, for it to be a perfect execution. Sayako is a pure pure limitless. This is precisely I said, it will end up NTR because I don't want it Sayako to be sealed even. Talk no jutsu won't work on her. Because she have a really fucked up background. This is why I am trying get to chapter 3 asap. But at the same time, I really don't want half assing this monster lord part. Because, I need a perfect execution of it. A good and nice execution! Because, that is the first shard she will get.
Paradox V
2024-05-01 14:40:45 +0000 UTCJust take "patreon ToS" out of your thought process. If you have an idea to use- use it.. I for one welcome content like that and even moreso if it helps explain things and shows the impact of a villain. I could show you far far far more extreme stuff that patreon allows just fine- and they know it too because they're such popular games. It's not about any of the content it's almost always about the style of the characters involved- and there's no issues with yours. so DONT worry about it.
D0
2024-05-01 14:28:14 +0000 UTCYup, what I am really scared of execution tbh. That's why I am so scared of and really tried to find a good perfect thing imo. The reason I don't want to do r*pe that early is because I have been trying to build up until that monster lord for a long long time. Which is the first shard Sayako will get. I can do it just fine but jesus patreon ToS is so confusing. This is why I am jumping to subscribestar or pixiv fanbox later. Which again, I am so lazy to deal with warning hammer tbh. Also, I am trying to find something really original. For example, a nice interface to show the stability rate of Sanako and Ayako, inner conflicts. This is why I said, I have been working on that NTS for a really long time. Find something original rather than pure copy paste of any Artists work even tbh. I don't hate NTR, trust me. Because this is precisely I said, some NTR fans are just weird. Are they interested in just fetish or the concept? Because, Sayako is literally there tbh. She is there to screw people up. But yup, NTS will just be the usual "Caused someone to cheat". Which I did try to plan for a really long time with Sam. But that's it. That's the thing.
Paradox V
2024-05-01 14:07:22 +0000 UTCNebel isn't NTS though... ?. Just... don't compromise for Patreon ToS.. If you want to add r*pe... do it.. You have multiple heroines. They shouldn't all give in and should all be reluctant in their own way. Juliette for instance is competitive- so she's easy. Sayako just has to make it a game and make a few bets. But that's just her.. You should have one you can be a little mean too. As crafty as Sayako is- is Kana really that unfaithful to Jack?.. Could even be side characters- just have as many varieties in kinks as possible. Variety is great and if you have heroines with the same body-type.. should at least try to spice scenes up with things like that. I'd say Kana could accept Anal first and it just spirals from there after she's been thoroughly trained in that aspect- but seems like she's losing her virginity by Jack or Sayako early enough anyway. But they should not all fall the same way.
D0
2024-05-01 13:49:00 +0000 UTCYup, in a few day I will close patreon. Just letting people have some time to click the link I shared. Since, I am still searching a platform to disable comments or won't even see the comments. Since, I am already active in subscribestar and pixiv fanbox yet again. Nah, just letting people know what is the real NTS. Like I said, I don't hate NTS, I love NTS like anyone else. What I am trying to do is, controlling the game story. Because, for NTS to really work. Sayako have to be deleted in this sense. That NTS to work, Sayako literally need to be sealed in a way, but Jack will find out and decide to seal, because otherwise, why he won't just seal her? I mean, sure, Jack can be evil and wanted to see the girl getting lewd. But, there will be a reason as to why Sayako are really hostile against him. See, even I got confused with the story right now due to focusing in monster lord for months on how to execute it. Because, I really wanted to use Monster Lord for this 2. Sex and Story at the same time. Because, imo, scars of summers mistake is that, imo, it ruined vanilla people due to no sex scene for that avoidable. That is my opinion. Again, I AM NOT BASHING THE GAME. I got into NTR because of scars of summers. Then I got into NTS due to warped desires. That's why I said, the perfect NTS is warped desires or nebel imo. Cause, I did mentioned that Jack don't realized he have NTR fetish. This is why people said, it should be one or the game going to have a lottt of problems. This is literally why I try to plan ahead for other chapter before the game got soooo confusing.
Paradox V
2024-05-01 12:53:29 +0000 UTCAh ok but BDSM is not my things but if you make it i play anyway because the game is good
SnowTig3r
2024-05-01 10:50:49 +0000 UTCDo it. Don't compromise. Do NOT compromise for patreon. They arbitrarily enforce things either way. I don't think there would be any issue for this game because of the character styles. But even so- it just is a horrible thing to do something else just because you're afraid of patreon. People will find a way to support you- as you said.. you already have a subscribestar and I thought you were closing patreon anyway?... Also I read that as NTS sex at the wedding at first because I am about to pass out. That would have been interesting enough too.
D0
2024-05-01 10:42:51 +0000 UTCHmm, when I said hardcore. It is more to BDSM, you know, the whip, chains, force cum drinking and stuff. Cause, I am not really into CBT tbh. Like the girl step on Jack dick or something. Not really into scat either tbh. Cause it just gross me out
Paradox V
2024-05-01 10:41:52 +0000 UTCI hope you go better in the future Im not really good with hardcore sex or excessive violence but its just me and my opinion sry for the bad english
SnowTig3r
2024-05-01 10:31:19 +0000 UTCToo much break taken. People have lost interest due to a long pause I did. Because I am controlling the story and tried to do it like nebel + building our futature. But yeah, I will start do things on a whim and let's see how many people would hate. Not much of a writer but I will start to ignore some. Because I really really wanted to stick with my vision. Chapter 1 -> Cacus Village Chapter 2 -> Eversea Town and Monster outbreak. Chapter 3 -> Renkai Village. Chapter 4 -> Ancient City of Juno. Maybe, I will do a story skipped a bit so that, Joanna is there. But, I will do Paradise Island in the future I think. Cause, it would kill suspense I think.
Paradox V
2024-05-01 10:29:41 +0000 UTCGet well soon, hope you get out of burnout. Some people will hate me when I say it but: If you need a month break, take it. Even if it says that an update will come out 3-4 months later. Health comes first, I know it's easier said than done. As for the NTS, perhaps a transition to the NTR at the end, with Jack making a decision so that it transitions cleanly into NTR and making the decision from the prologue irrelevant. For example, Jack decides not to watch sex all the time and let Sayako and the Girs have their fun.
Sakui
2024-05-01 10:16:32 +0000 UTCI will think of it more then, because, it has been months on how I would want to execute this monster lord thing tbh. Because, I really don't want to do this half assed with typical RPGM combat. I want it at least have some mechanic. I don't mind working on this NTS tbh. But, it will 100% ends up as NTR. Because Jack is a literal butt of a joke. Also, I am still thinking as well for that monster outbreak rotation as well. Talk no Jutsu like some suggest just won't work. Sayako is just evil. Well, there is a villain worse than her. But, Sayako being evil is not by choice, she just don't want to get sealed again. This is why I want to do it like OG game. Ain't really wordy enough. I mean, can see it happening now tbh, XD
Paradox V
2024-05-01 08:15:22 +0000 UTCBdsm is not really sexual violence at its base level it's when you go to the extreme it goes into that territory but no need for the extreme levels. Simple collars, tie ups are fine. As for Rape you don't really need it in this as Sayako has established relations with everyone and also yes it's against TOS for other reasons. Has to be consentual
BananaJezus
2024-05-01 08:04:37 +0000 UTCHmm, I see... Well, I mean, isn't r*pe count as sexual violence then? Does BDSM count as such?
Paradox V
2024-05-01 08:02:31 +0000 UTCSexual violence often is a turnoff for majority of sex gamers and there's a reason many sex games tend to avoid it. It's like scat and stuff.
BananaJezus
2024-05-01 07:55:13 +0000 UTCHmm, are you sure though? Because I am thinking to go sexual violence tbh. This is why I want to go to subscribestar. Because, I am really capable going that level of dark tbh.
Paradox V
2024-05-01 07:53:14 +0000 UTCPatreon TOS really does not affect this game as u don't plan incest and should not really need to use the other things that break it like sexual violence or non consent. What you have been doing is fine. Lot of the stuff patreon does not want is actually better to avoid as many just be cheap tricks that ruin things
BananaJezus
2024-05-01 07:51:39 +0000 UTC
