Serious Note about Paradise Island or Painted World
Added 2024-04-24 23:35:36 +0000 UTCI am pretty sure a lot of people going to be mad constantly anyways. Especially NTR or NTS fans insulting me endlessly and think I am playing around, XD. Anyways, here are some of the info about the Paradise Island on why I want to do it. If some people give a shit about it.
1. I got bored in focusing in Jack only. This is why NTR is so restrictive. Playing as him all the time feels miserable. But don't worry, chapter 2 people will be forced to play as him. Which is the main story continue back.
2. This part, will be fully play as Sayako. So, it is pure Nettori, but will have Jack pov. He will be temporary NPC kind of thing. I will give an option to see from his pov for that shadow play.
3. Artifacts. Like I mentioned in the castle library. This will help a bit on the party fighting against Monster King(Still deciding on the character itself. Still in the plan. The Monster Outbreak)
4. It is epilogue kind of thing. So, expect some important bits will be mentioned here and there. Joanna will come back and some of a bit story from her side. Like I said, I still want to stick with the OG game. Just I focused on the main 4 like Kana, Alice, Juliette and Yuki try to build more story on them. Ex, their background stories.
5. Nope, I won't get rid of Jack. I get rid of him, the whole story changed and there is no one Sayako will be hostile against.
6. People won't get spoiled that much since I lessen Sayako goals in this Nettori part. It might be a good time to build more background stories on both Sanako and Ayako a bit. As well, some of the characters.
7. I want to try find some formula that suits me. Since, I am more to Nukige. Not much of a heavy story person, but I will try to mention some important parts. Some might feel a bit skip. This time, I won't rush much since I learn a lot from chapter 1 mistake. I will go back there and fix some.
8. I will try to do some foreshadowing I guess? More to background stories of why Sayako became evil. But it won't have any context. Expect a typical speech bubbles in some flashbacks.
On a personal note. This game is not much of a NTR or NTS even. More like cheater series and I have updated the patreon page since some already called me a scammer. The problem with NTR is, the girl behavior needs to change. It is just usual NTR gimmick. Even NTS as well, the usual telling the girl to cheat on them. I am not kink shaming here, this is why I said NTR or NTS don't last long tbh.
The story wasn't able to be built up that much. But I did try to at least have a story tbh. This is why I prefer Hardcore Corruption. Because how unrestrictive it is and how I am able to build the story from beginning and each character motivations. I know I am not much of a story person and my story can be considered as shitty for some. Since, I am more interested seeing the girls getting lewd. But I will at least try to make the story is good.
For some who are thinking to insult me even further by going to that forbidden thread. You are welcomed to do so but I still stick to the main plan. This Painted World is more to my creativity freedom and why I don't want to do certain things like r*pe and some extreme fetishes. Here are the few reasons.
1. Story won't be able to be built from the ground up.
2. I am playing it safe due to how confusing patreon are. This is why I am finding some other platform to jump to.
3. This painted world, the characters that are involved in. They won't remember anything when they got out. Who are the characters will be involved in?
Jack
Sayako
Sanako
Ayako
Kana
Juliette
Alice
Yuki
Joanna
Anna
Some might ask, why the fuck I am doing a lot of characters? You already have a lot of problem in story itself. I will be honest and say a few reasons.
1. Reincarnation and change is something that are really complex. This is why I am trying to simplify things. Since, I spend months on solidifying the world itself first. Then, I will focus back on the characters themselves.
2. I got too absorbed in the typical NTR. I am not bashing or kink shaming NTR or even NTS. Just, I am the type that trying to find something original. For example, a complex villain, the MC not just being there to be cucked.
3. This is why I won't say either the game is NTR or NTS. I know typical NTR would have r*pe and I can respect for some who are interested in it. But, doing it will kill the story impact. This painted world let you know what I meant. Because, in my opinion. Once the villain got the girl, it is just more sex imo. I have been trying to get that Monster King and Dragon of Ruins tbh.
I did research on both NTS and NTR what they truly meant. NTS is not swinging. Jack is supposed to be so absorbed in NTR fetish. But yeah, somehow, I managed to piss off both NTR and NTS fans while I have finding a way to execute in an original way.
So, what is the game direction will be? Who knows, I won't say it is pure NTR or NTS either. This is why I rarely say anything tbh. Some can call me I don't have a vision and insult me even further to satisfy their anger or self esteem I guess. But, I will start to ignore and proceed what I have planned a long time ago.
Some also think, I am too softie. I am being tame precisely because of Patreon ToS and I know how many devs got the warning hammer. I know a few devs got hit by them. This is precisely why most dev have been playing it safe. For example, a very tame fetish. For some who know how many I shared in discord, will know how many extreme fetish I shared in discord for animations and stuff.
Comments
The only way I could see it is if you made it advantageous to the story. Like in NTR Sayako won but Jack got away and is looking for a way to stop her so he's out of the picture temporarily. And this is where you can just go to town story wise. You play as Sayako until he returns. Jack finds something that can stop her and when he returns you can have basically a choice system. If anyone played an old game called Infinity blade they will know what I mean. NTS you could say is just hero villain teamup where the hero aint as good as most think he/she is. Like gogo loser ranger lul
BananaJezus
2024-04-25 18:01:41 +0000 UTCThis is precisely the problem with the NTS vs NTR. Because in NTR, people already know how evil Sayako is. Which is why I am going to take from NTR storyline and to make up for it. Nettori and NTR after that. When chapter 2 hits, it will be pure NTR as in, from Jack pov only. I am trying to avoid people feel like a cuck hence I am trying to be detailed as I can since I know how Fujino got tear to shred for that SAO Finale in part 1 tbh. But at this moment, I won't say it is NTR, NTS or anything tbh. It is more to cheater series. And tbh, I have been working as well for that NTS. But yeah, it just increase my work load more to do dual story. So, single story is much better. But this painted world will be everything won't makes sense. Since, the world itself involves magic anyways. Just I am planning on how to execute it.
Paradox V
2024-04-25 13:35:49 +0000 UTCI agree on all points, especially point 5. "5. Nope, I won't get rid of Jack. I get rid of him, the whole story changed and there is no one Sayako will be hostile against." Getting rid of Jack would have too many disadvantages. Not only does the story change radically, but also for Sayako herself. Sayako and Jack are the MC. Getting rid of Jack would also mean changes with Sayako. Alternatives like, for example. a female Jack from the beginning of the game would just speed up the story so much that we never get past chapter 2. Since Fem Jack would be too corrupted at the end of chapter 1 and Sayako would have almost achieved one of her goals. Or Sayako as the main PC would also speed up everything in the story. Sayako's hostility towards Jack is important, at the moment it helps that the story goes a little slower, initially sticking to a small friendship from Jack's point of view and not like in NTS, where the two build up a big friendship too quickly and gives the feeling that Sayako knows that Jack is a reincarnation of one of the goddesses and wants to corrupt him in Chapter 1. In the NTR, Sayako has no clues that Jack is a reincarnation and Jack has no idea what terrible powers are waiting to be awakened within him. Offers a lot more potential and plot twist elements that make no sense before the first shard, except that the story would move forward too quickly.
Sakui
2024-04-25 08:09:08 +0000 UTC
