Page 12-14 Roughs
Added 2025-04-16 00:12:31 +0000 UTCAlright, my friends! Roughs for pages 12, 13, and 14!
Text-free versions followed by the text versions.
Excited to have jammed this particular scent callback in, nice and early, and happy to also get some of the clothes off in fast speed =D The dream is to get them all heading to the couch in fewer and fewer pages, so we're not on this chapter for a million years, but I didn't want it rushed TOO fast either you know? After these three pages, we'll do a 'reveal' and then, maybe fade to the couch? I'll see how it's all feeling when we get there. I'm still a litttttle nervous for how much dense monologing I've got planned for Owen - but again, I figure that's a problem for me to solve when I get there.
Personally, I'm both a little daunted and excited to try drawing the glass plug! I loooove the way they look, but rendering it is a little hard to fathom.
Shouldn't be the only post today; gimmie a few more hours to finish up my in-between-pages and illustrations! I've been cooking on a fun little sequence, and I think it's about ready to share =D I'll post it once I've decided on sound effect placement stuff.
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Comments
The “we look good together don’t we.” Wow, that’s hot. Imagine if they were out in public and someone thinks Owen and Judy are married, while nick is just…there 🥵
ookami145
2025-06-08 18:50:04 +0000 UTCHmmmm.... I wonder if it'll feel that way after I've drawn it? The whole page is her butt-hole ha! So I feel like the context makes it apparent?
Amadose
2025-04-21 18:49:23 +0000 UTCI think the dialog in the last page could use some tweaking. I think Owen's talking about Judy's butt being exclusively for him, no nicks! But the way its written its a little unclear. Other than that it's very good. Ramping things up.
Heart Land
2025-04-19 03:15:12 +0000 UTCAw heck! I love th hear it, thank you Diego! Just fun to bring up the scent play again, and have Owen notice it =D
Amadose
2025-04-16 18:46:59 +0000 UTCThese dialogues are such a turn on, I love how horny Owen is, how needy Judy sounds and how small Nick looks XD
Diego P
2025-04-16 17:53:06 +0000 UTC
