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Nick Caged - Roughs page 6-8

This was entirely too much work, haha! I knew I was being ambitious, but gosh, it was so hard to figure out how I wanted to get this short scene to play out, it really plagued me for a while! How to get them onto the Monorail fastest, and how to move into the playful teasing moment. Trying to figure out a '!!!' moment too, was really though for my brain; if you draw them SUPER cartoony you can get away with really over-the-top expressions, but if you try to draw them a little more on-modle it's hard to pull that off. I re-roughed page 7 so many times 0_0

There is still so much here that I want to refine, clean up and redraw. But I'm trying my best to leave as much as I can for the pencils stage. The less I get caught in the weeds the better; so much of this work was finding references and poses I wanted to squeeze in, in a way that made the panel feel tight and busy and interesting, without it all being too crazy.

Everyone I've shown this to thinks I'm a touch mad for trying to do such a busy scene... But, you guys... I've been looking at the BlackSad books, and he does not shy away from things like this, and I want to hold myself to the idea that I'm trying my harder with each page, gonna try to be the best I can... maybe it's too much? Maybe it's just enough? Still, it's rare when I get these guys outside of the bedrooms, so I think it's kind of fun to want to make the world a little richer and jam every panel with as much fur as I can.

When I actually start on all of this - I won't be over-drawing the backgrounds like I usually do; So much of this is bodies in the monorail that I'm only going to be spot-drawing the backgrounds that peek past the bodies. I'm also aiming to keep this monorail to medium-sized zootopians, as I figure the large ones would have a different monorail, and the smaller ones ride in a smaller compartment on the train (this is based on the monorail we briefly see from the movie).

I think too that I'll try scaling my document up 50% more; to get a bit more pixel depth. Pray for my tablet, that was previously already giving me RAM warnings haha 0_o

Okay I gotta dash to a friend's wedding. Tuesday, I'll crack into the pencils or page 6! I hope you are as hyped as I am. I'm genuinely excited to get that 1st panel penciled =D

Thanks for sticking this out with me folks - I can't wait for all of this!!!

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Comments

Woof, comment hits hard - thank you Ocaron!

Amadose

Aw Izzy that means so much to hear =D Thank you!!!

Amadose

love your work and the drive, you have a good mind and good skill, stretching yourself for improvement is a good goal and i hope you enjoy the results as much as we do, just remember that you are a great artist so push but dont fear or get disheartened if the results arnt up to what you want right away, we are our own worst critics.

ocaron

Gosh I'm so excited for this comic to continue more... Genuinely something I look forward to everyday!

IzzyMuldoone

What a lovely comment to get - thank YOU Shitstasi, that's so deeply kind and generous of you to say. Means a lot to me.

Amadose

hah!

Amadose

Thank you very much for this comic Amadose. Its one of the few Cuckolding themed adult comics out there that is not completely depressing or cruel. Thank you very much for providing us with this great piece of Adult Art.

Shitstasi

Hopefully, your wife finds some one great to fuck at the wedding!

Æon Nyshe

The Bull+ tiers are invited to send me a reference images, and I'm randomly opening that up as I pencil, to see who's lucky enough to squeeze in.

Amadose

It went well! Low key and small, and fun =) Was a lovely little ceremony.

Amadose

I was thinking about that! But also, I don't want to distract you any further in the scene? it's already so busy, that adding more, will just make it tough to follow. I'll see how it feels as I start to pencil it out =) This took so long to feel a little more secure in! I was really struggling for half a week trying to decide how I wanted this to flow and what sort of paneling I wanted for it all. Usually, I have a pretty good idea of the sorts of sexy things I want to show - but a scene transition, and walking - isn't something I've ever practiced.

Amadose

I was thinking about that? But I'm nervous to insinuate that they'd ever make bystanders a part of their play without consent. I want this moment to very much be -just for them- without having any kind of bleedover. If any bystander takes note of either of them I want it to be for a 'Oh I recognise those two from the news,' or; 'wow she looks great in that outfit', sort of thing. Ambitious is my middle name ;D I can do itttttt

Amadose

It was a good time! Very low key =)

Amadose

The inking should be OK. It's just the penciling that miggggght give me trouble? It's all a little ambitious. But I want to aim high you know! You should see the reference layers I wasn't brave enough to share - SO MANY fur's and clothes and screencaps - you have no idea =D

Amadose

How do we get in to the background? :P

FezzFox

Happy you keep trying to Improve. I hopethe wedding goes well. :3

shadowdarkninetales

Oh yeah, and enjoy that wedding!

Jackie Blue

Maybe one or something in the background could look surprised like "hey, ain't that..?" or "isn't that the Internet couple..?" But yes, this is very ambitious as it is. Not that you can't rock it. I k ow you can. You do, too. But I am happy that you, after some episodes where you sounded more insecure, do busier scenes again.

Jackie Blue

This is such an ambitious sequence! I love busy scenes like this but I can see how much work it is going to take already! I hope you sit on a massage chair while working on this, I'll be cheering you on through the process, I know you'll nail this! I know Judy is just teasing but it would be funny if a long-eared bystander did hear their conversation and got suspicious XD

Diego P

wow looks great have fun at your friend's wedding

AL871

Oh woof, Ama, you can 100% tell how much went into these and I am OBSESSED. Looking back at chapter one and the safer backgrounds and colors to where you are now, with a fully fleshed out environment and world. Incredibly impressive. Can’t wait to see the fleshed out expressions on this one. Hope they don’t give you too much trouble when you get to inking!

Meggolas

=D Thank you Director! Me toooo - These 3 have been tough to figure out but I'm feeling a little better with it all, not that there is something on the paper =)

Amadose

Looking great can’t wait to see the pages take more shape and the story playing out

The Director

Thanks much Rickochet! I think it'll feel easier when I start to get stuck in. The layouts really ate up a huge amount of brain space and panic for me. But now that I have SOME structure and bodies to dress and poses and reference... I think I can just flow through, maybe problem-solve hands and such when I come across them. It should be easier... Blacksad is the dream, I'll be happy if I can get half way =)

Amadose

AW thank you Pax!

Amadose

YO RESET THE CLOCK. ITS BEEN ZERO DAYS SINCE THE LAST BLACKSAD REFERENCE. Love those comics. This is indeed a big undertaking, lots of moving parts, lots of characters but it’s nothing you can’t handle, just give yourself the time and space to work on it. Love the world building, love the expressions. Have fun out there, and congrats to the happy couple.

Rickochet

Art is looking great as always

Pax

Thanks bud! These were so much work you have no idea

Amadose

Thank you so much Sora! This was so much worrrrrk! I don't dare show you the chaos that is my reference layers... but yeesh; SO MANY dumpster drawings and photos of clothes and furs!

Amadose

haha, what a cute comment =D

Amadose

Its really starting to come together!

Reynard

How are foxes the devil when bunnies are this evil!

Shiro-kitsune

This is looking great

Sora (Night Sky)


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