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Ties That Bind - Page 19 Pencils

Pencils are done? I think? I hope?!?

I'm sharing all the crazy work I put into that second panel and gosh, if I'm just sharing too much madness. I had it in my head that I wanted to show Nick's face and mouth doing something outrageous - while the opposing panel would show Owen and Judy's mouths. Really have the contrast between both scenes and using Owens' ass as almost a barrier between them. Simple enough right? But then I also had this doozy of a sketch from a few pages ago, and I've been dying to get it into the comic!

It's just... so hot to me! And gosh do I want to get this angel to work, but dang, is it tough to get the KISS and this gratuitous mating press all into one camera angle =/. Even now, I'm still not completely happy with Owens' shoulders and body twists. But I feel ready to move on - I just don't have the patience to redraw it again. I figure it'll resolve itself in the inks OR it'll just look weird, and hopefully nobody will notice because the kiss and lewdness will pull all the attention ;D

Another few minor frustrations? When I was sketching out the Nick's ass-eating balls-on-his-snoot moment, I originally had him thumbing Owen's ass. I was really into it until I realized he was supposed to be jerking off with that hand. Broke my heart a little. Finally, I also used a reference image from my 'visually interesting ideas' folder - just cool poses and scenes and ideas- and while I don't trace or anything like that - the pencils for this panel, ended up looking too similar to the inspiration material. So I might have to figure out a way to change it up a bit if the inks don't seem unique enough. I feel like ball goggles are a pretty common idea, and there just aren't really any other angles I can explore to show this 'licking up the press' moment that I wanted to show?! But also, I don't want to be pinching other people's work, sigh. All frustrations that I'll figure out as I go.

Onto the inks!!! Hope you're all digging it so far.

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Comments

I loooove getting to draw their tails =D It's so rewarding to add in these big long curves to the page.

Amadose

Aw Doa, that means a lot to hear! I try to share as much as I can about the process and thinking! I love to read that stuff from other artists =D

Amadose

Heck! The contrast of the first 2 panels is just awesome! The two making out and then Nick nosediving into the mess...perfect. And the Overhead Shot, man I'm gonna love them tails! <3

Fen

Your passion and energy with these written updates are constantly inspiring.

Doa

yeah it works well, very effective closure for the chapter

tredain

=D Thanks bud!

Amadose

I'm too ambitious ha! So glad I'm pulling it off *mostly* =D

Amadose

=D Really wanted to show off all three of them, happy as can be, as the camera sort of pan's out.

Amadose

Ooo nice overhead shot!

Kadath

I’m always gonna be an impatient horn ball 😅. It’s totally true though. Best to proceed with care at this point.

Danielfox

These poses look super difficult to pull off in the first place! Amazing job as always

Mikey

Yeah, the whole finger-butt thing is too much if it's coming from Nick, it's like he's overstepping his cuck boundaries. But if Owen ORDERED him to do it, now that's a whole 'nother can of fish. :3 UwU! But, ye, holding a bit on it will make it even more special, Ama' teasing us with it feels so much better right now! Thanks, Ama'! <3 OwO

Sherry Khanny

Oh that overhead shot is perfect <3

tredain

You're always so positive! =D Thank you, Daniel! I'm feeling fonder of the idea of keeping thumb-butt for another time. But it was fun to think about as I penciled!

Amadose

Earning my pay ;D I'm looking forward to it too!

Amadose

Oh I love all the messy parts and liquids fumbling on Nick’s face! So much fun. And speaking of fun, I am WITH you for how hot the sketch with the action and kiss is. So many good Owen/Judy expressions.. idk, I’m on board with you fitting it in. I’m also team Nick-thumbing-Owen’s butthole. I mean, he could be doing that in one panel and going for his own manhood in the next. 💁‍♂️ but hey, I totally understand if it only works better in theory ^^~~ Amazing stuff as always! I’m a slave to this comic! 😅

Danielfox

Jeez you just keep putting in work. I can only imagine what those are gonna look like finished.

shadowdarkninetales

Thanks, bud! Yeah, I'll see how it hashes out as I ink! I'll be super excited to wake Judy up next page too - I feel like I've got license to be a little creative as she sort of dreams-awake. I sort of picture her dreaming about being in a BIG maw - beastars style, before waking and realizing it's OWEN and he's just nibbling and kissing her ;D I might just save the whole 'finger in butt' for another scene: having Owen order Nick to do that to him could be a whole thing =D

Amadose

Yessss that's everything I wanted from that shot. Thank you Izzy.

Amadose

When you’re so bored with drawing the same poses you nail a camera to the ceiling for variety. But for real that overhead frame is super ambitious. Going all in on it and I love it. I always dig seeing your process in the sketch pages, all the little thoughts creeping into the page. Also, that side by shot of Nick going in and Owen kissing Judy is so good. Showcasing the pack hierarchy but not alienating Nick entirely. Owen gets Judy and Nick gets BOTH. If you wanted to get that thumb in, you could show a small transitional panel of Nick taking his hand away, moving up Owens leg and then showing the thumb in. It does stretch the formate of the page but it’s easily doable in concept. Plus, the idea of Nick giving up his jerking JUST to give Owen and Judy more attention is a textbook cuck move. Maybe next page. Looking good, Amadose. Make some changes if you feel it’s too close to the references but you’ve got plenty of premium thoughts on the page.

Rickochet

That overhead shot...I'm so excited to see it all done! Something about that shot just completes and adds up all the good feelings, love, and respect all three of them have for each other! I love this comic a lot. Great work! :D

IzzyMuldoone

ALSO - maybe it works in a real kind of way? Nick would be caught up in the moment, and be forgetful. Judy's not awake enough to reprimand him about it either.

Amadose

Ahhhh you're so right. Haha. I didn't even think of it, and should have! I just wanted to show him doing MORE =D At least he's staying outside, on the vulva and balls area!

Amadose

As a fellow ass eating enthusiast a part of me goes eeep! with Nick going ass to puss BUT its porn fantasy and doesn't need that much realism element hehe, still super hot!!!! 🔥 I most love the bottom pull out angle, it's a fantastic transition and I really love it!!

Heart Land

=D I love a pulled-back full-room shot like that too. It sets a scene <3

Amadose

Hooooooly that overhead shot Owen pressing down on Judy is so good! Legit one of my favorite ways to show off porn.

KinotheFox

Thank you Shoeborn! I love that people are digging it so far.

Amadose

Thanks D! Yeah I hate to lose the thumb. It's a little bold to assume Nick would do that too... But i got excited! I guess we'll have to save that kind of penetration for later =)

Amadose

Of course! He's an integral part to cleaning that ass ;D

Amadose

Gosh thats soo hot 🥵

Nagerat

=D you're welcome bud!

Amadose

Thanks Skippy! Me too - I think it'll be a fun one.

Amadose

That center panel is already gorgeous and is going to ok fantastic!! such a shame that the thumb idea had to go for the sake of continuity, that second pannel really fought back it seems XD b you worked it out and it looks very nice!

Diego P

i like how nick has a role as owen fucks judy

AL871

i love all these ideas!! thank you for coming up with the most perfect always 😭🙏

FinnickFeden

Seeing your process is awesome! And this has me super excited to see the final outcome!

Skippy The Fox

=D Thank you Maxi!! We're on the final legs of the comic, this page will be my 'fade away to black' moment before we wake up Judy! So it's gotta feel spicy and kinky and peak-cuck =D

Amadose

XD well you do it quite often

Tigerchris

Wow ! This one looks amazing

Maxi

Haha - I love it when I can derail you bud! <3

Amadose

Oh my gosh, you're so wonderful - thank you so much for the exciting comment! I was feeling a bit deflated after opening the file again this morning and seeing MORE things I wanted to change!!! Means the world when you all find the pencils sexy =D

Amadose

Thank you so much Rim! Yeah its one of my most fav parts of supporting other artists on Patreon: getting to see THEIR madness unfold ;D For me; I feel like my pencils are the hardest part - so there can be a whole lot of iteration and redrawing. I know that people who do this 9to5 get so much better at this stage of things - I want to get to that level!

Amadose

Aw bud I love to hear that =D Thank you so much!!!

Amadose

I was writing some kink stuff today and then this comes out... damn...I might need to go on break now...to be alone...too stimulated.

Tigerchris

Jesus fuck, This is HOT. You never cease to impress, Ama. I’m not gonna drool too much over this page since I’m currently at work but I simply cannot WAIT FOR THE INKS. 🤤🤤🤤

Meggo

Watching your mind think 50 ideas for just one drawing and tempted on all the paths you could’ve taken. If you were a rper you’d be overwhelmed with ideas 24/7 if you already are as an artist lol. Lovely upload as always Can’t wait to see it progress.

Rim

"Digging" it is an understatement - even these pencils get me going 🤤

Modest MOSFET


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