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Owen's War Face

Upper-tiered Pals - I keep fiddling with things, but can't settle on Owen's snap-gleefully-mean face. It's got to convey so much! Excitement, meanness, authority, but also... playfulness.

I've been redrawing it with some reference screenshots from the movie; in order to figure out the teeth situation: something I want to try and get better with. Jeez, they gave Nick some big molars!

Anyways I got lots of IRL work to dive into in a sec, so let me know which of the Owen faces feels right to you (I know it's only subtle differences, but follow your gut!), and it'll help save me hours of flip-flopping later tonight when I dive back in =)

It's also your chance to get a sneak peek at the reworked Judies too. 


Owen's War Face

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I liked C a lot - but did figure people would read it poorly. I'll keep the sketch handy for the future; but I think in this moment, A or B has a more Owen spin to it.

Amadose

I like them all, but I think C looks more... unambiguously mean without the playfulness? At least, that's how it reads to me, so I'd probably say "any of them except C, if you want to leave a hint of playfulness in amongst the meanness". If you feel confident in making him look truly hard-ass in that individual panel though, before using the surrounding panels for the playful context, C could absolutely work. :D

Jeeves

Ha yyyyay! Love a 'can't go wrong with any of them' - at least I know I'm heading in the right direction! Next up - I need to figure out those middle panels 0_0 A tied-sheath closeup. How on earth does it worrrrk (I know I've drawn it before but I want to improve and get it looking right-er)

Amadose

Aw dang! Haha. I figured C would fall short, especially given the prompt. For me, while C doesn’t show the playfulness (at least on the surface) I love that it feels like an immediate home-run by Owen at Nick’s request for him to be more mean. As June put it, he’s “leaning into the scary predator side of things.” I also assume we’ll see him ease back up and after care. Honestly I fucking love them all. Each one gives me the chills in a different way. I’m still going to be sold on the smirk regardless, especially given that it also provides Owen a slightly sadistic enjoyment in owning Nick and watching him squirm.

Danielfox


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