Chapter 5 - Knot on Top 15-16 (Finished)
Added 2021-07-02 21:11:16 +0000 UTCReally wanted to sneak these in before July hit - two days late - not the worst!
Flipped flopped with the text on these pages. Started to write all kinds of things, that ultimately just didn't match the mood or the 'end of chapter' vibe. So opted for something basic and the equivalent of a fade-out for the script. I hope you all approve; a friend put it in a fun way; that on the final page it's like I'm cucking the reader!
What's Next?
I suppose I'll dive in and chop out some of the single panels for you all, while I work on the QnA script, looks like I need to do them for pages 13-16! Let me know which panels you're most excited to see!?
Previous 'Single Panel' Posts from this chapter:
THEN, gotta start work on the next chapter script! I've been calling this one the 'escalation chapter' as it'll focus on Nick and Owen talking while Judy is KO'd atop of Owen; Nick asking to step the cuckoldry up - it's setting the pins up for us to explore even more of the harder parts of cucking (like chastity play - the next-next chapter)
Also gotta post the whole of the chapter on here as a collection - I'll do that in a sec - or maybe I ought to wait for all the single panels, so I can post it all together in one mega-post?? I'll figure it out.
Have a great weekend you lovely lovely people, as always thank you so much for all the support and kindness you show me here. Really keeps me excited to build more.
LINKS
Finished 1-4 , 5-6 , 7-8 , 9-12 , 13-14
Flats of these pages!
Layouts/basic script for the chapter
Comments
That's fair Akataja! I know kissing can feel like a barrier for a lot of folk. But I think it matched the moment, and I don't think any of them would mind. It shows a level of intimacy and cares that I think this fuck they're starting, warrants =)
Amadose
2021-07-04 06:18:35 +0000 UTCthis is awesome work ^^ but I don't feel good when they kiss? this seemed way too sensitive and lovely for just fucking around?
Akataja
2021-07-04 00:36:37 +0000 UTCHa I've thought of it! A tattoo under her fur, or a brand, so it stops her fur from growing, or something easier like a peircing. I secretly love the idea of Nick getting one too. Maybe one day !
Amadose
2021-07-03 17:37:32 +0000 UTCRight? I felt the same way, and had written SO MUCH STUFF out to jam into these two pages. But then realized it just wasn't sitting with the story. That the chapter dialogue needed to be a bit more of a curve to it; so that at the end of the comic it's less. Alos a matter of; theres so much art theres no space for wordballoons! Pretty happy with the compromise; we know they're saying dirty things to each other, but we only get to hear as much as Nick does - it is it's own kind of fun.
Amadose
2021-07-03 17:36:23 +0000 UTCThanks, Mikey! I honestly harbor a bunch of guilt at working so slowly on this all; I'm really glad that it doesn't feel that way for you =D It was really fun to finally do a whole chapter that was just sexy times; definitely felt like I'd improved from the first pages to the last pages.
Amadose
2021-07-03 17:33:36 +0000 UTCThat's super interesting! The story is all very abstract in my head after the chastity chapter - but I've got an idea that we might explore, that's in a similar vein; where Owen gets a girlfriend - and it makes Judy jealous - forcing J and N to revaluate what it is that they want and can give Owen. All of that stuff feels ripe for interesting story and emotions.
Amadose
2021-07-03 17:31:57 +0000 UTCMaybe Judy should get a tattoo on her ass for Owen
Kento The Fox
2021-07-03 14:21:50 +0000 UTCWoa, your art has gotten sooo good! The expressions are just a treat and every single close up looks positively tasty! I agree with many others, Nicky should get his muzzle busy in there asap. <3 About the dialog, well I am slightly disappointed, there were so many hot possibilities... That said, I understand why you did it and I agree in the long run it was the best choice... I just would have liked something now... Aww, man, you really ARE cucking us here! xD I’m so looking forward to the Q’n’A and then the next chapter,... things are finally getting really spicy!
Fen
2021-07-03 09:44:38 +0000 UTCDude effing amazing. I love how the colors came out, the dialog, all of it. Your pacing is fantastic, not too slow not too fast. Like we're not having to wait a year or two to actually get to the meat of the story (and I don't just mean sex but like the whole story around that). It's just right.
Mikey
2021-07-03 09:25:54 +0000 UTCJust mega SUPER !!! The Owen and Judy scenes are simply the best and the hottest! I can't wait for Owen to finally push his knot completely into Judy. As a sign that this is his prey. And only his. The last picture made me think that Judy was saying that she loved Owen (or at least a certain part of him). I'm curious whether it will work out well with Nick in the long run. I think it would be interesting what would happen if Judy wanted to go further in her relationship with Owen, but Nick no longer agreed.
Gambit
2021-07-03 07:10:36 +0000 UTCHah we gotta walk him up to it! I'm sure we'll get there eventually ;D Thank you so much for the lovely words Daniel, love knowing how much joy you got from these final pages - they were a whole lot of work and I'm super proud of them.
Amadose
2021-07-03 06:17:53 +0000 UTCOh. M. Goodness… Bravo. This gave me everything from start to finish. The lighting was voted well, it’s so intimate for their first solo sesh. I can’t imagine how squeamish Nick is in this moment with the thousands of butterflies that must be swarming in his stomach. Of course I’ve probably already logged a good hour in staring at the WIP panels of Owen’s butt and the final result did NOT disappoint. So much man.. and don’t even get me started on that “porn star cock” hehe. You’ve caught my interest with the idea of Nick being ordered to suck them balls.. I’m holding out hope for the future that he gets his muzzle shoved into that musky rear… Leave them wanting more I suppose. 🥴🤤
Danielfox
2021-07-03 01:03:49 +0000 UTCI plan to have Owen order Nick to suck his balls while he's tied to Judy. We'll ramp up to it! Excited to start writing ittttt. Just have to aim to keep the page count nice and low 0_o And thank you for the compliments! I'm really happy with the way it turned out too =D
Amadose
2021-07-02 23:47:41 +0000 UTCThe night color scheme looks great! And damn… Owen’s huge knot in Judy looks so hot! Well done! And in these next part where Owen and Nick are going to talk are you intending on doing something naughty? Maybe Owen wants to affirm his position as the Bull and show off his (way) bigger “foxhood” compared to Nick’s, or maybe how stronger and beefier he is, that would be sexy xD idk, just some ideas that came to mind with those two having a talk after all that! Can’t wait to see what’s next :3
Tay
2021-07-02 23:22:17 +0000 UTCHeck YES. Thank you Rickochet! You always leave the best comments =D Ha - yeah had to tease you all for an extra day or two. Really work up the anticipation ;D In reality; I always forget how hard the words and effects are. I end up pushing them around all over the place until things 'feel right'. That kiss tho - I'm still madly happy with it. Me toooo - I've got a fun opening moment for the chapter (Owen panicking as Judy climaxes so hard (on taking the Knott) she passes half out), and Nick sort of running and telling him it's ok. Then ensues a convo where Nick sort of says he's ready to level up (this part will be the hardest part to write I think), followed by Nick maybe, being ordered to suck Owens balls /do a bit of Bi, as the chapter concludes. We'll see how it pans out!!!
Amadose
2021-07-02 21:58:53 +0000 UTCHa! If he can't hear them, we can't hear them ;D Us readers have to know our place. Thank you as ever, Kad - your a constant source of encouragement <3
Amadose
2021-07-02 21:53:41 +0000 UTCThanks for only cucking us 2 extra days for these beauties. Jkjk 😏 unless...?? Yooooo!!! Looks amazing. The lighting is so on point and you’ll never hear me complain about more up close and personal shots of Owen. And those expressions are giving me the vapors~ Definitely looking forward to Nick and Owen interacting with each other one on one. It’ll be a good change of pace and fun to see what the two trouble makers can come up with when alone~ July is off to a rollicking good start and everything you’ve describe has me on the edge of my seat for the future.
Rickochet
2021-07-02 21:42:45 +0000 UTCLove that you have them whispering to each other while Nick is 'asleep'. So naughty and sexy XD
Kadath
2021-07-02 21:41:17 +0000 UTCAw heck, thank you Jet!
Amadose
2021-07-02 21:32:56 +0000 UTCLove that one too!
Amadose
2021-07-02 21:32:48 +0000 UTCHa - I'm constantly derailing you and your work!
Amadose
2021-07-02 21:31:17 +0000 UTCAmazing work
Jetfox
2021-07-02 21:24:47 +0000 UTCHaha, thank you much Andry! Hot DAMN I did not expect 16 pages to take so long and be so tough, but hella proud.
Amadose
2021-07-02 21:20:50 +0000 UTCI am so excited to see the individual panels!!!! The first one of Owen pressing his knot against Judy will be my new desktop wallpaper on my laptop!
Andry SilverFang
2021-07-02 21:18:40 +0000 UTCHehehe so good drooling over that butt... hehe well I was thinking about working on other things but now, just that butt and you know. XD
Tigerchris
2021-07-02 21:14:57 +0000 UTCOMG OMG its finaly here!! GOOD JOB AMADOSE!
Andry SilverFang
2021-07-02 21:12:47 +0000 UTC
