Silly Hourly Comic Script
Added 2021-06-10 17:40:01 +0000 UTCHeya, my higher-tiered friends!
I figured you might all get a kick out of this. Have you ever seen or heard of Hourly Comics Day? It's a silly thing in the comics community; where the artist draws a panel or two every hour, as a way of showing their day. It happens every February (I think?).
Well, I wrote a silly script for a Nick-cucking adventure Hourly Comic =D I'm not sure if I'll follow through with drawing it (I'd want to keep it sketchy and low-effort), but I figured you all might get a kick out of the script I threw together?
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Hourly Cuck Comic
1am
Narration: Finally, the weekend.
The door opens, a weary Nick flomps onto the bed next to a sleeping Judy
Judy: ...What time is it?
Nick: Late - paperwork.
Judy: ugh, no work talk. Sleep.
6am
Narration: Judy gets up early to jog.
Nick still work-clothed, with a pillow over his head as a beam of light hits him.
Narration: I fall back asleep eventually.
9am
Nick: Is that... coffee?
A wiggling nick snout appears from blankets, sniffing the air.
Nick in the kitchen as Judy kisses him and hands him a cup;
Nick: 'You are an angel'
Judy: 'And don't you forget it.
10am
Narration: Shower, then dress to impress.
Nick in the shower or brushin teeth
11am
Narration: Judy rings her fam every week. It takes -a while-
Nick bleary-eyed: 'and you are... Jack?'
Phone: 'Ted! Number 24! come on! We've met like 10 times!'
Judy is loling next to him
12 Lunchtime
Narration: A new cart has popped up a few blocks away. Truly the best part of city living.
Nick sticking tongue out after eating his taco
Narration: I roll the dice on a fungi-taco, and lose hard.
1pm.
A grinning Judy and Nick walkin home
Judy: So I was thinking...
Nick: Really, the whole weekend?
Narration: Judy decides to tease me about the upcoming afternoon. Honestly, I'm super nervous but... also really excited.
2pm.
Narration: I do some Patreon replies, while Judy tends her plants and texts.
3pm
Narration: Dang. Still doing this. Running a Patreon is a lot of work!
4pm
Narration: Time to get ready
Nick watches Judy dress
5pm
Narration: Tv while we wait. I don't remember what we watched I was... distracted.
Nick - I can smell how excited you are.
J - I can't help it! (or) playfully 'whap!' and: Not for you!
6pm
Narration: Owen's arrives.
Owen holding a bag of foods and flowers: I brought take out!
Judy taking a bite of the flowers: my favorites, thank you.
(this is overplayed so maybe something else?)
7pm
Judy between Owens legs. as Nick picks up plates.
Narration: Judy and Owen work on desert while I pick up.
Owen: beer me, pup.
Nick: Ah yeah, sure!
8pm
Nick sitting leaning over and watching Owen and Judy fuck on the couch, she's full of squeaks!
Narration: It's going to be a long and good night.
9pm
Silhouette of Judy standing in front of Nick, cum streaming from her
Judy: I- I need a shower...
Sound of the shower in background Owen has a hand on Nick's shoulder;
Owen: You stay here cuck, all night, and don't even think of playing with yourself.
Shower noises and sex noises as Nick sits there 0_o
10pm
Narration: I'm a good boy. I can stay put. This is fine. I can do this.
Growling and sex noises from the bedroom.
Judy: fuck yes, I've been thinking of you all day. You feel so good.
Owen: You're all mine prey.
Narration: How does he have the stamina...
11pm
Narration: The quiet moments are the hardest... and get me the hardest.
Nick sat there quiet, ears perked up.
The same panel of Nick, but now:
a soft murmer from the room:
'oooooh fuck, again?'
'Kiss me'
Nicks's tail is wagging.
12pm
Narration: My cock won't stop leaking.
From bedroom: 'should we get Nick?'
'no, not tonight. I won't be sharing with you tonight. Our cuckie is sleeping on the couch this time.
'oh god. But I teased him-'
'Sssh now; what do prey say?'
'...yes sir'
'good girl, now ready to go again?'
'...yes sir.'
Narration: It'll be another long night.
Comments
I don't think so, not yet! We're ramping up as we go =)
Amadose
2021-06-13 06:03:50 +0000 UTCOh and one thing I wanted to ask, I don't think it has been addressed directly. With the "splash zone" tease from Jude in the earlier Q&A, and the "I need a shower" line, Nick is on cleanup duty, right? Maybe established next comic?
Retromancer
2021-06-13 02:48:32 +0000 UTCNarration: Dang. Still doing this. Running a Patreon is a lot of work! A self-referential comment? I hope us Patreons aren't getting you down. I know you are a visual artist, but you have a real talent for storytelling, too. A short story/vignette like this one with a couple of sketches (I'm thinking 2 or 3, not colored, just black and white), would be gold. Maybe a quick way to show progression in N&J's lives?
Retromancer
2021-06-12 07:59:21 +0000 UTCNick bleary-eyed: 'and you are... Jack?' "Phone: 'Ted! Number 24! come on! We've met like 10 times!' Judy is loling next to him" This is so funny to me. I love it
Retromancer
2021-06-12 07:28:25 +0000 UTCI see Chastity as a space for them to expand into. Always chasing a new high-with-the-kink. I think with time, even extreme kinks like this can lose their shine, so Chasity is there to help keep things from falling into 'normalcy'.
Amadose
2021-06-11 19:51:17 +0000 UTCIs chastity really necessary? They’ve both been denying Nick pretty HARD. Chasity is just a girls’ name at this point. Just lock him in a cage, why don’cha? Now if... oooh... if Nick became difficult, more defensive, more protective, as most males are of their mates, then, yeah. Time to lock him in a cage. It’s not rape if it’s consensual. But this might cause probs for some readers, maybe? Is this TOO far? Especially if he is not let out after Owen leaves; his new home within his own home. Thoughts all?
patient_zaero
2021-06-11 14:29:42 +0000 UTCIt's in the cards - a couple of chapters away
Amadose
2021-06-11 05:52:23 +0000 UTCAbsolutely digging it <3
Zyfer Kazumi
2021-06-11 05:45:59 +0000 UTCReally would love to see Owen lock Nick in chastity
Addie R
2021-06-11 00:59:54 +0000 UTCExactly! If it was 48 hours comic book day I'd show them all getting some brunch together and then spending the day in a puppy pile, before starting the 'cuck' back up. I love the chll moments just as much as I love the high moments. Really glad I got to pull your heart strings AND put a twist in your gut - really pleases me to know I'm scratching the itch right. =D
Amadose
2021-06-10 23:25:02 +0000 UTCYou are god tier at cuck stories. I adore that you show them being a normal couple that have included this, what some consider extreme, kink in their lives. While it leads to some lifestyle changes, they aren't so drastic that it truly threatens the marriage at all, and shows them getting closer. there's a tiny bit of emotional play, just enough to give a little knot in the stomach that kind of enhances it, but not too much that you end up down or scared. And the parts that are raunchy are just fantastic. "Silhouette of Judy standing in front of Nick, cum streaming from her" buttons!!!!!!!
Mikey
2021-06-10 23:08:18 +0000 UTCI love both of these! I'll add in the notes, see where it all lands if I take it forward. I'd love to build these out a smidge. Really glad you liked it Fen =D
Amadose
2021-06-10 22:46:26 +0000 UTCWe'll see! I'd love to follow through on this - but first things first. Gotta finish off those 4 pagesssss.
Amadose
2021-06-10 22:45:06 +0000 UTCUsually I don’t like the ‘you wait outside’ kind of scenarios but yet again, the way you describe it (even with this few words) it works for me... maybe it’s because I have some knowledge of your overall vision for our lovely couple... Anyway, I’d love a lower effort comic like this (not taking to much of your time), showing their day to day, regular couple moments as well as their cucky moments! Some ideas: 6pm: Just have her munching the flowers casually without mention, most normal thing in the world! 9pm: Have Owen make it a bit harder for the pup with a bit of scent play. Maybe Nick is given Judys used panties to sniff, or Owen smears some cum on his nose he’s not allowed to clean. With canine sense of smell these kinda things must be so delightfully frustrating!
Fen
2021-06-10 22:05:15 +0000 UTCAnd this concludes Amadose cucking the audience with a great story and no visuals. 😄 Jk...unless. 💀💦 That was quite a read, definitely a hot under the collar scenario for sure. Hope there might be more in the future if time permits, sketchy visuals or not.
Rickochet
2021-06-10 21:32:57 +0000 UTC*fans self* Oh goodness, Owen being so possessive of Judy does things to me... *melts*
Rufus The Rat
2021-06-10 21:16:25 +0000 UTCHaha or just Judy smacking/licking her lips =D
Amadose
2021-06-10 19:29:03 +0000 UTClove it, 5pm i prefer the whap, and for 6pm you can have her grope Owen and say warm and ready to eat
ocaron
2021-06-10 19:19:33 +0000 UTCWell shucks, maybe I should draw it up. I want to get the last of this chapter DONE, and the QnA plotted out before I consider anything else... But maybe it's something I can bash out as I pencil the QnA?
Amadose
2021-06-10 18:56:11 +0000 UTCI know the idea is for this to be a side comic or a sketchy project, but I legit think this is a great format for a comic. I think it'd be a neat idea with Judy playing hooky with Owen
June Opossum
2021-06-10 18:47:10 +0000 UTCHaha YES. Perfect.
Amadose
2021-06-10 18:12:57 +0000 UTCFuck i'm horny
2021-06-10 18:04:06 +0000 UTCHehe that's why I'm in the Horny Wife Tier uwu, thanks for listening! ❤️
Andry SilverFang
2021-06-10 18:01:25 +0000 UTCYes, they are married! I wanted to show them being a normal couple! Doing the joint call, doing their own projects in the house, that sort of thing; it's supposed to reflect a normal couple, not just porn-couple. That being said, I think maybe I could sharpen up 1PM and 5PM to have a bit more back n forth though!
Amadose
2021-06-10 17:51:17 +0000 UTCAW heck thank you!
Amadose
2021-06-10 17:48:49 +0000 UTCHehehehe, I know Judy is my mom but.... Oh my God! I want Owen to fuck me so bad, all night long!!!! It's a perfect script but I feel like it's missing a little bit..... Of frolicking between Nick and Judy throughout the day, they are married aren't they? I mean that chemistry they have between them, that makes them a perfect couple, regardless of the cuck game.
Andry SilverFang
2021-06-10 17:47:54 +0000 UTCFuck this is REALLY REALLY GOOD
Bri
2021-06-10 17:46:22 +0000 UTC
