Chapter 5 - Knot on Top 9-10 (Finished)
Added 2021-04-02 17:15:56 +0000 UTCTwo pages finished up!!! Hope you all like 'em!
Attaching all the finished pages for the chapter so far! Really proud of how some of the faces came out.
Should have the NEXT two-page finished up shortly before I start diving into the pencils of the last 4 pages.
I know you guys love to get the single panels, without text on them; I'll see if I can throw something like that together after I've finished these next two pages (p.11-12).
LINKS
The refined flats of these pages.
Pencils (and text) of these pages
Layouts/basic script for the chapter
The help-steer-the-ship-Vote is currently happening (for higher tiers), this time we're voting on Nicks-sexuality!
Higher tiers are always invited to send me questions (in private or as a comment) for the in-between-chapter QnA's! But I'm always game to answer questions for any tier outside of the QnA too.
Comments
Yeah, he's multifaceted and this is everybody's first time doing the cuck thing. I wanted to show him stop-n-start-ing and checking in =)
Amadose
2021-04-04 22:01:02 +0000 UTCI like how in the next to last panel Owen is looking a little unsure, then when Judy gives him the go-ahead, he goes into full dom/predator mode. And Judy loves it
Retromancer
2021-04-04 04:56:49 +0000 UTCI bet Judy is going to run her paws over those scratches marks and remember this night... and many more for a long time
A Mad Man with a Box
2021-04-04 02:53:29 +0000 UTCAw man this is amazing! It's always a treat to finally see the finished pages! Love Nickys expression in the first panel, you can really feel how eager he is! Owen seems to be pushing all of the right buttons ... <3
Fen
2021-04-03 09:27:20 +0000 UTCOh dang. I'll fix it for the next update. Typos are my bane.
Amadose
2021-04-03 07:15:47 +0000 UTCJudy’s little lip bite!! That face Nick makes in panel one is too cute. Like way too cute. Also second to last panel there’s a L missing in “if you’ll let me”
Rickochet
2021-04-02 22:17:17 +0000 UTC=D Yesssss. I thought they were super fun too!
Amadose
2021-04-02 21:42:50 +0000 UTCJudy's little 'Time Out!' hands are so cute XD
Kadath
2021-04-02 20:44:03 +0000 UTC=D Thanks Zac!!!
Amadose
2021-04-02 18:12:55 +0000 UTCCant wait then! Keep up the great work your art and story are amazing :)
Zac Polk
2021-04-02 17:49:12 +0000 UTCThank you so much, TC! Ha everyone needs a bunny OC; they're too much fun.
Amadose
2021-04-02 17:46:44 +0000 UTCRight? So many furry comics just have the knot go in STRAIGHT AWAY. I think it's way more fun to have it be something they've gotta work on! I'll have them tie at the start of the next chapter =D So you won't have to wait toooo long!
Amadose
2021-04-02 17:46:10 +0000 UTCWhew way to keep us in anticipation for when the knot actually happens. I'm so looking forward to that
Zac Polk
2021-04-02 17:44:40 +0000 UTCI LOVE how you can really feel the size difference between the three. like its just SO good. like really well done man. i kind of wish my OC was a bunny for once. XD
Tigerchris
2021-04-02 17:30:41 +0000 UTCThank you Mikey!!! =D
Amadose
2021-04-02 17:19:52 +0000 UTCI love every single bit of this. Amazing coloring work, expressions, dialogue, all of it. Just great work!!!
Mikey
2021-04-02 17:18:46 +0000 UTC
