Chapter 5 - Knot on Top 7 & 8 (Single Panels)

Hmm I see what ur saying, ur right I like that too. Actually I like it better than what I was suggesting because meek cuckold personas like I was suggesting are too played out. I do wish it was emphasized through ur text then. Idk just didn't resonate with me. Thanks for replying, I like what ur going for now that you told me.

Hikers Mirage

That's a good note! But I feel like Nick is really fast and witty, and I don't do a good enough job of making that come across in the earlier chapters. I sort of figured giving Nick a sharp response like this just plays to his character, better than a softer meek response (which is what I had in there originally). Been trying to make the character's voices really pop through. I also like how this current version, is also another affirmation that Nicks enjoying what's happening. Which we can't ever have enough of!

Amadose

Instead of saying "just watching my deepest darkest kink" , he should say something more passive, just seems too direct and on the nose from someone like Nick. It needs to be like a hesitant, almost stuttering response. Owen asking him something and yanking him from his fantasy world where he's drooling over Judy being tossed around by Owen SNAPS him back to reality and his response should match that. Idk though maybe it doesn't match the pacing ur going for though. Thanks keep up the great work and I hope you stay dedicated to this because I just can't get enough.

Hikers Mirage

'impending doom' =D Makes the whole thing seem so morbid haha. =D I felt like I'd nailed it on these ones too - thank you!

Amadose

That second one is just mm. The lighting, the texturing, the impending doom. Really showcases the best of your talents in one~

Rickochet

Oh dang - thank you so so much FFF777x That's a real hero moment for me knowing I helped inspire you to make something =D Really excited to have you here. I'll keep plodding along with this - hopefully soon I'll break out from under this chapter and I can start work on some more ideas =D Thank you again bud<3

Amadose

It’s always a present surprise to see pages get put out, I sometimes forget About them. These close up views are awesome as always.

Ryo

Wow! These are great! I'm not really a fun of cucking but your a m a z i n g art brought me here and seeing the amount of work and care you put into creating the scripts and visuals, the whole story and logic behind it - I'm just extremely happy to support you, even with these few dollars! Not to mention that you actually inspired me to create something myself! I'm very impressed with your work and your art is brilliant - the colors, the lights, the perfect expressions, it's just fantastic! I'm excited for the next chapters, I would love to see some more Nick in the action but hey it's just me, so do what you feel like doing, take your time and take care! Thank you for sharing your beautiful stuff! ^^

...I'm jealous

Tigerchris

Perfect uwu ❤️ good job!

Andry SilverFang