Chapter 5 - Knot on Top 5-8 (pencils UPDATED)
Added 2020-12-13 23:00:02 +0000 UTCHeard notes, and suggestions so made some small changes!
- Less Judy Tears (I was just copying what hentai folk do - which I like! But I don't want it to seem like she is sad-crying! My aim is; tears from how good it feels)
- Smaller Judy, and a few new heads
- Fixed up some faces!
Comments
Aw I love that! Yeah this isn't really the year for finding new people to fool around with =/ Hopefully when we're all vaccinated!
Amadose
2020-12-27 19:16:12 +0000 UTCI gotta say.. You're really opening up my avenue of possibilities in the bed room. If only I could find the guys to do it with lol
Spicy
2020-12-27 06:22:47 +0000 UTCJust one of those things right? Dialing in the details, to make it exciting, but also don't want to miss-communicate things! Yeah, my intent is to make the toy look worn out, used, and not well cleaned (if at all).
Amadose
2020-12-14 22:15:29 +0000 UTCReally great. I do admit that you might have been kind of overdoing it with the hentai tears, but I get what you were going for. Dialing them back a bit was probably the right call. also, has Oqwen used that Felshlght recently? It could be a lot of fun to make Nick take his sloppy seconds even with a sex toy.
Benjamin Artwohl
2020-12-14 22:03:59 +0000 UTCThat would be super fun - but it's not in the cards for the chapter. Maybe as a QnA later on?
Amadose
2020-12-14 18:27:57 +0000 UTCYeah, a friend pointed out that it should look poorly cleaned, so I'll make it a smidge wet looking?
Amadose
2020-12-14 18:27:36 +0000 UTCII kinda hope we see some of Nick's humiliation with the fleshlight. maybe Judy holding it, or her laughing at him standing there tied to it.
jim
2020-12-14 18:13:58 +0000 UTCLove how that fleshlight got even more busted xD Looks wet as well now? Next step would be making it look even more stretched open! ;D
Fen
2020-12-14 14:17:58 +0000 UTCNote taken!
Amadose
2020-12-14 06:16:37 +0000 UTCAw heck, thanks bud.
Amadose
2020-12-14 06:14:51 +0000 UTCthe sheets they still seem intacted XD
Tigerchris
2020-12-14 03:52:45 +0000 UTCPage 7, last panel, Nick is like 'fuck my wife? .... I guess!'
Kadath
2020-12-14 00:58:44 +0000 UTCHhh, this is looking exceptional~
Pheeze
2020-12-14 00:51:47 +0000 UTCLove the size difference!
Summer love
2020-12-13 23:27:48 +0000 UTCOh man, the size difference now is amazing~~~ I think that Judy should be bulging a little bit from Owen's big cock uwu
2020-12-13 23:05:33 +0000 UTCNice. Nice. The size difference is a plus, makes Owen look even more powerful and Judy helpless in his grasp. Good work.
Rickochet
2020-12-13 23:03:56 +0000 UTCI think, that in the face where he has hearts in his eyes, the muzzle, should be in the form of "0" to express more pleasure! It is only my opinion uwu I am very excited to see the unique panels ~ ❤ Good job! - Andry Silver Fang
Andry SilverFang
2020-12-13 23:03:36 +0000 UTC
