Chapter 5 - Fuck-Sesh Script

I for-real need help coming up with a title for the chapter. Let me know if you all think of anything.

This script is a DOOZY - tons of things are happening, and as I start to lay it out; it's looking to be about 16 pages? Because of that, everything is taking longer than it should be. I should be able to pick up the pace later on since you all voted for simpler flat coloring for the chapter (excited!). But the layouts, pencils, and inks? Probably going to be a bit slower.

I'd usually post some layouts at the same time as the script, so you can see what I'm picturing as I write but you all might have to wait a bit longer for that stuff. A big part of my layouts is finding references and poses, and doing that for 16 pages takes an ageeeee. So what I might do, to get myself some bonus time - is to drop you all some large res images of some of the single-panels from the QnA. I've saved a couple for myself to use as iPhone wallpapers, and figure you all might like to have them too?

Just a heads up about my scripts: they tend to change a lot as I work. Some of its broken into pages, some of it is left ambiguous, some panels are described, some aren't - it's all very WIP. But it'll probably stay about 75% the same, so you can get a good feel for the beats of the comic and my plan. I'm also not worried about typos and bad grammar at this stage. Finally, if you want to avoid spoiled until I start working on the pages one by one, and posting better-rendered stuff - look away and come back a lil later on =)

Anyways, enough stalling.

--------------------

Where are our heroes at?

Judy: Is very excited, with first-tryst excitement. She has been saving herself for a few days now, teasing Nick about it, but also secretly very excited to fuck Owen. He ticks a lot of her boxes, of being large, in charge, and predatory - and she can't wait to see what it's like to be with someone for the pure-cuckolding experience. Deep down, she's a bit nervous for her hubby. She trusts he'll speak up, but still she doesn't want to hurt him, and she knows how anxious he can get about this kink.

Nick: Is filled to the brim with nervousness and excitement. All the wild things Owen brought up, fill him with dread but also... elation. The fact that so much of what is about to happen is out of his control is really doing it for him. He's keen to see what their first time might be like, what the flavor of cucking will be, and how Owen will play his role. Deep down, while he's terrified of losing his wife, he doesn't really believe she'd leave him or anything - he trusts her to stop and speak up when she needs to. Deeper down still - Nicks excited to be a part of a larger pack/herd - to be accepted.

Owen: Is very excited to break this couple in. They seem too good to be true! He's tentative and doesn't want to spook them with his ambitions. So he's testing the water a bit. He'll let the first time dictate itself as it goes. He is very attracted to Judy, and very attracted to the idea of cucking Nick.

Page 1

Close up of Nick and Judy's faces.

Maybe Nick is licking Judy's Neck as she arcs up? It's all very intimate.

J - Gasp 

J - More... I want more. Ah!!! Fuck.

Judy looking more directly at Nick. maybe holding his head in her hands.

J - Gods, I love you so much

N - Oh Jude, I love you too.

J - Mmmmmhhh fuck.

J - I'm so... FULL.

N - Yeah? Does it feel good?

J -  Oh honey, like you wouldn't believe. Moan. 

Judy kissing her hubby

Page 2

A hand from behind Judy appears and grasps her shoulder

Owen from off-screen

O - Now, now. Enough of that - 

The camera pulls back a bit. The hand pushes Judy down into Nicks's lap or chest, he's wearing boxers making sorting a semi?

O - I'm not here for a threesome. 

Tell him, lil’ rabbit. Whose cock is making you feel so good?

Her face is smushed into Nick, maybe we see his semi-neglected.

J - Oh god. Yours. It's your cock Owen.

Cut to a wide, scene-setting panel with Background. 

We see Owen pressing Judy down into a wiggly Nick, as he slowly fucks her doggy

O - Grunt- That's right it is. It's your Bull’s cock spreading you open. Your Bull’s knot pressing up against you. Not -his-.

J - Oh fuck, I'd forgotten how good this could be.

Page 3

Owen leaning over Judy

O - That right? Been a while?

J - Uh-huh. After meeting you, we... we decided I should save myself for you...

Owen maybe with a surprised face

O - Ah! My poor girl, I didn't know! Well, genuinely touched. But, Nick! I'm disappointed in you. I told you not to cum in her. I didn't say anything about leaving her unsatisfied.

N - Oh! Don't worry, I took car-

O leaning over her, maybe he's looking at N directly

O - Doubt it. But, it's my fault really. Some things you just can't leave to a cuck. A pussy this good NEEDS to be fucked. 

N - whine

O baring his fangs at Nick

O - Don't worry, bud. From now on, I'll be making sure she gets treated right.

Page 4

A big FWIP! as Owen pulls Judy up and away from Nick. Pinning her doggy style so that Nick can see the penetration?

O - Come here, you.

J - Eeep!

O - Let's show him how it's done with a better view

N seeing action- Whoa. -Park that big mack truck right in that lil’ garage.-

Maybe O replying: Ha!

We see some close-ups and fucking panels. Maybe a pulled out shot showing Nick jerking his cock as Judy mumbles and moans.

Page 5/6

A little bit of time has passed. 

We see a sweaty Owen. 

O - Phew! Goddamn, Judy. You feel incredible. 

J - mmgbdd uff, mm, you too, Owennnn.

O - How you doing back there, Nick?

A panel of Nick with cock in hand and !!! face

N - I am -awesome-. You two LOOK amazing.

O - Haw, that's sweet of you, -cuck-, thank you!

Owen looking at Nick's cock, or Owen sort of sweeping-palm-pointing at Judy

O - Listen, I brought you something. As a way of saying thanks.

In the bag next to the bed.

Nick reaches down and pulls out an old fleshlight. It's a beat-up well worn-out model.

N - …Huh. A used Fleshlight. 

O - Yup! My old one. I figured, since you’re so kind to give me YOUR toy, I'd give you mine.

I mean, I won't be needing it no more. 

Close up of Owen's Knot pressing up against Judy. or Owen looking down at that. Or both?

O - Listen, cuck. I'm getting close. So, I want you to lube up and knot that thing, while you watch me do the same to your wife.

N - Oh! But I was going to have my turn after you- 

O - Hey, now. It's not a request. 

Don't worry. You can have a sloppy thirds or fourths later. I don't plan on banning you from fucking her - yet. But right now? I’m ordering you to empty into that toy, while I empty into your wife.

N - Fuck.

Page 7

A quiet panel of Nick slipping into the toy, and Owen looking down at Judy with :P face

O - Ready for a tie, Jude?

J - omg omg omg

O - Heh. I'll take that as a yes. Here goes.

Press

Moan

Grunt so tight.

PRESSSSSSS

Moooooooan -***!

J with epp face or making a T symbol with hands

J - Time out, time out! 

Abashed Judy

J - I'm sorry, I’m sorry, you guys! That knots just TOO big, I can't take it. I'm so sorry-

O - Oh hey, it's ok! We don't need to make a tie happen today. We'll work up to it another time, no worries! I promise.

J - Yeah? You’re not disappointed?

O - Not at all. With or without my knot in you, you feel -amazing-.

O - but, ah... you good to keep going? I'd still love to cum in you if you’re game?

J - Absolutely, I would love that.

O - Grunt

We see Owen picking up the pace and slamming into Judy. Maybe we see Nick picking up pace with his toy.

Close up of Judy looking up at Owen as he strains

J - Oh fuck, that's it. Fuck me.

Close up gets tighter in, Judy's talking into his ear

J - Oh fuck, don't stop, you'll make me cum too... Faster. 

Breed me, Owen, take that pussy-

Owen erupts with a roar. Judy squeals

We see ropes of cum escape and in the background, Nick cums in his toy.

A panting Owen collapses on top of Judy.

O - Fucking HELL, Judy Hopps.

You. Felt. So. Good.

J - Giggle

O looks up and back at N

O - And how are you, pup?

N - Tied to this thing!

O - Haha, it's good tho right?

Owen rolls onto his side with Judy.

O - Come here and spoon your wife.

I might not have tied you, but I'll be cumming a while longer. Let’s get comfortable.

J - mmm <3.

Cut to a birds-eye view of Judy, in a spoon squished by two sets of red fur. Looking incredibly satisfied and happy. She's a mess at the back, as Owen holds her firm against him. In front of her is Nicks fleshlight sort of ballooning with his own cum. 

The camera zooms into her. She lets out a deeply satisfied noise as in the background we hear N and O chitty chat about aimless stuff

Camera zooms into her even more so we see her face, as she dozes off.

page break or black panel

Darkroom - same close up of Judy as she awakens.

J - sleep mumble ‘So full- mrrk!'

O - Shhh now, Judy. Wake up, quiet now.

J - mmmh What? 

Judy looks up and Owen is above her (missionary) looking down

J - ...Owen?

O - Hey there sexy thing. Hope you don't mind - but I wasn't done yet.

J - Ahhhh.

Judy looks to her side and sees a content sleeping, Nick. (or maybe he's out of the room?)

O - Shhh, don't wake the sleeping prince.

J - Ok, but go slow. You’re so thick…

O - Heh, you'll get used to it soon enough.

Maybe we see their bodies as Owen grinds.

O - I was thinking, PREY-

J - gasp!

O - -to celebrate the start of things to come, tomorrow you should come to play hooky with me.

J - oh, no, I -

Owen looming above her

O - -Small rabbit- I've caught you. From now on, -your place is on my cock.-

Your husband can keep your heart. But this pussy? This is mine now. Spend the day in my bed, and I’ll prove it.

J shudders and shakes.

J - Fuck fuck fuck. I'll -ah- think about it, just don't stop. Don’t stop.

O - Heh.

Good girl.

Final page

Side profile (focused on the couple, with foreground shadow of Nick)

J - Moan - I can't believe we found a fox like you. I can't believe I'm doing THIS.

O - Mmm, this is only the start, prey. You'll be seeing me a lot more often. I'll leash you. Train you. Breed you. -Claim you.-

The camera pulls out a bit and we see some of Nicks's arm, while the camera stays focused on the couple

J - Oh fuck.

O - Ever inch of this is will be mine.

The camera pulls out fully and we see that Nicks actually awake, and stealth jerking it with a fat grin, as they kiss/hump.

J - Oh shit, Owen don't stop, I'm about to... 

O - That's it. Cum for me.

mmmm mh (kissing sound)

End of chapter.

---------------------

What's the next step? Layouts! Check out some of my older layouts get an idea:

https://www.patreon.com/posts/41166317

https://www.patreon.com/posts/36069764

After that I figure I'll start penciling up the pages as a big bunch (updating you all as I go), when those are all penciled, I might start inking and finishing the pages in batches (maybe 4 at a time?) we'll see, and wing it as we go.

Lemmie knows what you all think of the script - excited to hear your thoughts - and as always thank you all so much for being here and supporting my silly comic. It really makes the whole thing feel special =)

Look after your selves friends.