QnA 1 - Script
Added 2020-09-04 16:01:03 +0000 UTCAlright, amigos. Here is my QnA script draft 1!
I think there's still some work to be done on the jokey/playfulness between our two heroes. Especially at the top of page 3. If you've got some better lines, let me know! I want it to feel a bit more Nick and Judy. I'll be penciling the art and brewing on the text as I go =D
Hoping to nail a look that's similar to SamurShalem's early Judy and Nick stuff:
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/35991313/
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/35986438/
That sort of limited pallet and nothing too crazy for coloring, look. We'll see how it pans out.
I hope you all think this is a fun inbetween-er? It was really good to write up.
Comments
Comics are also a visual medium, so you've got to put visuals up front and first. Nothing quite says 'Im the boss' like a big dick. I wanted to keep things pretty real feeling - penis size isn't really the thing that get's Judy going. It's all about the situation and the person shes fucking. =) But I was super happy to have people ask, I think it set me up for a fun reply!
Amadose
2020-09-08 18:34:13 +0000 UTCReading the comic and then the comments I think it's interesting that the biggest "controversey" is the size play thing. This is something that I have noticed too in my work. For me the cock size isn't the biggest deal (funny tho, I do draw WELL endowed males as all my favorite characters are equines, but I tend to only do that bc it's expected. It was fun to do alex the femboy as a different route ^^) I really enjoyed in the comic Judy indicating that she doesn't think Nick's cock is pathetic calling it "pretty." In a similar vein my recent miniseries the hotwife chantelle is quite enjoying herself ruining several of her cuck's orgasms in a row because she just absolutely adores playing with his cock. It's not a repulsive thing to her. She calls it "cute." This seems far more plausible to me than her hating the bits of the man she loves. But i see that people really desire penis size play and I think what it boils down to might ultimately be a sense of powerlessness. The bull is supposed to be the embodyment of masculine power in the relationship. This is probably why cuckoldry and feminization tend to go together as well as bisexual play. It's a fascinating thing as when you see a girl cum 5 times in a row to her boyfriends fingers you realize size isn't what it's all about. Size is merely speaking to what it's all about, stripping any sense of control and power from the cuck. At least temporarily Of course it's strange, size on it's own is just plain erotic I have to admit... seeing a powerful male bit's jiggle with a tell tale weight is just the best :P.
Bucked!
2020-09-08 02:37:33 +0000 UTCThanks, bud! It's early days yet. =)
Amadose
2020-09-06 06:04:30 +0000 UTCThere's a lot to like about this story, but the best is how Judy actively takes a role in cucking her husband. A lot of it right now is teasing/pleasing, I wouldn't mind her becoming a little more dominant towards him though. But only after some time - the story has been very organic and well-earned so far
Retromancer
2020-09-06 03:13:02 +0000 UTCHmmm, notes taken!
Amadose
2020-09-05 18:41:25 +0000 UTCYeah! It's like a half comic - in the future, it won't have an opening page like this one. We'll just dive straight into the QnA part. But I wanted to add in that what's going on the context for this first one =D
Amadose
2020-09-05 18:39:33 +0000 UTCThere should be at least a little jealousy from Nick on his ability to perform in regard to size when compared to the bull! And perhaps more doubt or concern, while he has an attempted fox bone of course. :3
Kyden
2020-09-05 12:21:11 +0000 UTCOh boy I didn't expect this to become a comic in its own! It's great to see more of their characters and feelings for each other! Really excited now! =D
Fen
2020-09-05 08:17:24 +0000 UTC=D Thanks Ryo!!!
Amadose
2020-09-05 02:00:59 +0000 UTCSure! The script hasn't had its grammar pass yet, since I'm changing it so much as I go. So maybe wait till closer to the end ;D But you can always point out errors as long s your nice about it!
Amadose
2020-09-05 02:00:45 +0000 UTCI do love this, exploring the different sides of the kink as well seeing where this will go with questions and the comic it’s self. Keep it up!
Ryo
2020-09-04 20:52:16 +0000 UTCWiggly balls!
Kadath
2020-09-04 20:13:30 +0000 UTCAaaaaa, I wasn't expecting to see my question up, oh my gooooosh! <3 Also, are you okay with us pointing out grammatical errors, Amadose?
Xeelay
2020-09-04 18:50:07 +0000 UTCAs a reminder - I'm always taking questions from the $4.20+ tier. If you want to add an idea to my list (for next time), check out this post's rules =) https://www.patreon.com/posts/40022101
Amadose
2020-09-04 17:30:58 +0000 UTCI always feel like the focus on size difference is a bit skewered - like, for Judy, it really doesn't matter ALL that much? I plan on having some size 'issues' come up a bit later on in the next chapter. But I don't have any major plans to belittle Nicks size or anything, at the moment. Maybe later on when he's in chastity, Owen will have more reason to tease him =)
Amadose
2020-09-04 17:28:32 +0000 UTCYup =D although I'm not sure what species shes supposed to be? Even with the ref? So far my sketch of her is like a hidden-by-hair otter type.
Amadose
2020-09-04 17:24:46 +0000 UTC=D =D =D
Amadose
2020-09-04 17:23:27 +0000 UTCI think that’s pretty nice! I love the penis size questions lol maybe you can talk more about their differences, maybe you show that, yes Nick is not a bad endowed Fox, even bigger then average for a Fox, but Owen is off the charts for a Fox, that he uses XXL Fox Condoms Hahahaha (or even that he can use wolf condoms if he wants it lol, while Nick’s condoms don’t even fit Owen)
Tay
2020-09-04 17:23:13 +0000 UTC=D Yessss!
Amadose
2020-09-04 17:22:56 +0000 UTC=D So glad you like it! I love the whole QnA things I see people like Kadath do - but I wanted to frame mine a bit with the whole 'we're running a blog' and make it a bit more comicy! Happy to hear its working ha.
Amadose
2020-09-04 17:17:52 +0000 UTCThere is Emily! Yay!
sms
2020-09-04 17:12:51 +0000 UTCThis is so cool!!! The QnA idea is definitely neat. I totally got giddy when I saw my question ☺️. I feel this is gonna be a really awesome way to connect to your fans.
Danielfox
2020-09-04 16:32:15 +0000 UTCEEEE get hyped!!!
Mikey
2020-09-04 16:17:36 +0000 UTCexcited XD
Tigerchris
2020-09-04 16:06:08 +0000 UTC
