Chapter 4 - Inks
Added 2020-05-13 18:09:14 +0000 UTCMaking some progress!
The next step is flat's (simple color for the characters). I'll share those up when they're done, hopefully befoe the end of the month! Then, afterward, I'll switch things up and start finishing up a page at a time. I'm super excited - thank you all for helping me make this thing so far =D
Gotta say I'm pretty happy with! I think I leaned too heavily into reference material for some of the illustrations, but I'm trying not to look back, I don't want to spend all my time reworking things. Gotta move forward! Regardless, I'm pretty pleased with like, 75% of it all. There's a couple of pages where Im like - dang!
I'd love to know what you all think so far.
Just a reminder - the text isn't final, I'll go over it and fix up typos and the likes after I've done the flats.
ALSO - some one came up with a great idea that the title should be something coffee related. Let me know if any of you have any ideas!
Version without text, followed by the version WITH text...
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Comments
I like to focus on the stuff around the sex! But yeah there are lots of just sex chapters in the idea box, and I'll add more for the next-chapter-vote at the end of the month.
Amadose
2020-05-13 22:43:01 +0000 UTC=D
Amadose
2020-05-13 22:41:54 +0000 UTCAwesome! And I'm sad that this chapter's 11 page is the end, and not that more messy like used condoms or cum everywhere. At least we can see more in future chapter!
sms
2020-05-13 22:40:09 +0000 UTCTook that break and oh my with the visuals cleaned up its even better
Tigerchris
2020-05-13 20:22:52 +0000 UTCHrm... there's an opportunity for a sex pun in there somewhere about coffee grounds. Or coffee beans. Hrm... maybe... 'Nick Gets Roasted'?
Rufus The Rat
2020-05-13 20:17:47 +0000 UTCIf only I wasn't trapped at work I could truly enjoy this awesomeness.....i do have a break comeing up. Hehe
Tigerchris
2020-05-13 20:08:50 +0000 UTCOh yeah, there are crazy typos and the likes in there. I'll do a fresh pass on the text once the flats are finished up =) Steamy coffee is good! I was thinking of like 'double shot' or an animal take on the word for a specific type of coffee? Like we have 'americano' and 'macchiato' what would a zootopian name be?
Amadose
2020-05-13 20:02:23 +0000 UTCi ran into your first comic recently but every page has got better and better only one comment, on page 9 you have "Owens is the fox the job" i think you mean "Owens is the fox for the job" and my suggestion for a title is steamy coffee
ocaron
2020-05-13 19:03:45 +0000 UTCDon't get me started on how many erotic ways you can implement wedding rings. Lol
Jeff
2020-05-13 18:39:47 +0000 UTCAhhhh That means so much! Thank you Bri!!! <3
Amadose
2020-05-13 18:38:12 +0000 UTCGoddamn this is all EXTREMELY good. This may wind up being my fav chapter in this story yet. 👀 Oh to be cucked by a bull like him...
Bri
2020-05-13 18:14:45 +0000 UTCDang - just realized I need to add in wedding rings =D Whoops!
Amadose
2020-05-13 18:09:45 +0000 UTC
