Saturn Seven: Chapter 57
Added 2023-05-27 17:51:26 +0000 UTCDownload PDF to view. Many more chapters to come. Proofreading goes well. Writing goes well. Big things are happening.
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Big thanks for the amazing review! I'm glad to tell you, you have no idea what's about to happen. Three more chapters are already done and will drop shortly. I'm working on chapter 61 at the moment, but I've got writer's block. Need to listen to some special music. Cheers
2023-06-02 15:59:04 +0000 UTCSpoiler filled reviews of 56 and 57 below: Another 2 amazing chapters from you! Chapter 56 reminded me why Janna is one of my favorite cruel giantesses. Her character growth is very well done and believable. Feet worship content has been pretty rare on your stories thus far and you found an interesting way to introduce Janna to it and have her get off on it despite her once again, fleeting desire to be a goody two shoes. The reveal of the backstory of the human population of the planet being tied to Nazi Germany was very unexpected. I'm starting to connect the dots with Pardona, and Borbarad too. I feel like Laura and Janna are infatuated with the power they wield but also exhausted from having to worry about food contently. (Personally, I think If they end up keeping their size and going to another world as Ultimate Weapons it would be so epic it would be off the charts.) The ogre section with Furio was a good quickie showing the brutal domination of the ogres. (Was hot still despite your portrayal of their grossness) The development of the Christina & Steve dynamic with Janna has been great. I was thinking it'd be difficult to feel sorry for Cristina after seeing so many more interesting and likable characters fall prey to Janna, but you found a whole new way to break her and develop her character into something fresh for the whole story. I love the way Janna's twisted mind is working and her being petty and abusing her size is hot along with how evil it is. It helps when she isn't breaking my heart killing other characters I love. Steve is basically a foil to the Janna and Laura that we've come to know the story thus far. Things are going to reach a breaking point soon.
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2023-06-01 04:38:12 +0000 UTC